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jd_junkie and sidlj.
It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.
This is more-or-less how it will work:
You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.
THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.
Let’s wallow, baby!
jd_junkie and sidlj.It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.
This is more-or-less how it will work:
You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.
THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.
Let’s wallow, baby!
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Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:25 am (UTC)Daniel's limbs are loose, languid. No wonder, as Daniel was the first to arrive and managed to ease away the tension of yet another week from hell, courtesy of planet M-whatever-the-fuck its official designation is. At least he had the courtesy to leave some hot water for Jack.
Jack wanders over, bare feet slapping lightly on the floor. He keeps staring, afraid to break the trance he appears to be in. Daniel's body ... his body gleams in the firelight. Jack doesn't know how Daniel gets away with it. No matter how dirty or bruised Daniel is when he manages to throw himself (when he's lucky, and dragged unconscious when he's not) back through the safety of the Stargate, those pale globes are perfect. Jack thinks about his own scarred butt and snorts. His own might not be like a work of art, but he's the only one who is allowed to appreciate the vision laid out before him.
And so he does, dropping with a bitten-off grunt onto battle-weary knees. The position is appropriate, as he worships at Daniel's body. But not that Daniel is exactly aware of that. Still, occasionally, Jack does let an endearment slip as he fondles the warm, smooth cheeks with both palms.
Daniel rouses, lashes fluttering in confusion. “J'ck?”
“Yeah. Just ... I just want to....” Jack's hands glide in firm, deliberate circles, as his voice gives out.
Daniel arches his back and settles back, cradling his head on his arms. He's not stupid. It's not the first time he's arranged himself on the rug and waited for Jack. Even when they're both too tired to fuck, he makes a point of giving himself to Jack with this unmistakable invitation. Even when the only payoff will be a caress, flesh on flesh, before exhaustion forces them both to bed. To well-deserved sleep.
But tonight is not quite as tiring. Jack's not passing up the opportunity to touch and feel. Danny's butt is as smooth as a baby's. Without realizing it, he voices the comparison. “You must've been a beautiful baby, lying stark naked on the couch, examining everything with those eyes, wondering how and why and even when.”
Daniel squirms with discomfort. “Jaaaaack,” his voice holds a shadow of warning. His childhood is not something he likes to think about, not even the precious baby years.
Jack doesn't torment him, but leans over to lay his cheek against that part of Daniel that he finds so perfect. As Daniel relaxes once again, Jack thinks to himself, no matter, Danny, you'll always be my beautiful baby.
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:48 am (UTC)Such a nice final image. *sighs contentedly*
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:54 am (UTC)Thank you, also, for easing our withdrawal symptoms this weekend. I'll survive, in my own delusional way, with my fixed McShep goggles firmly in place.
Eek - post midnight hugs,
'lenka
Re: Beautiful Baby
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Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 05:46 pm (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:55 am (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:59 am (UTC)And ::giggles:: I thought of following up with a bit of innocence to counter your naughtiness!
As for the tiredly loving, I think the epsom salts must've seeped into the ficlet.
Always hugs for you,
'lenka
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:23 am (UTC)Deeds xx
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 02:56 am (UTC)Mmmmm. This was fun.
Thank you for reading and ... appreciating.
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:32 am (UTC)As it should be.
This was great!
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 03:00 am (UTC)I'm so pleased you liked it. I just tossed it off on the spur of the moment, but, yes, adoration fits the mood perfectly.
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 09:25 am (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 03:04 am (UTC)And, hey, Jack's not stupid. After all, Daniel might just cover up and not be so ... available. Which would make everybody very, very sad. And that would be bad.
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 01:37 pm (UTC)Sorry, I'll be good now.
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)It's much more fun being naughty and ... imagining.
Thank you for the Awww and Mmmm; now I feel all warm and fuzzy myself, even though there's no fire ... or Daniel ... or Jack. ::sighs::
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 02:33 pm (UTC)Thanks for writing. :-)
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.
And - yes - I was trying to capture the loving feel without being overtly sexual. Because there are SO many ways to interpret what baby means between two people.
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 04:07 pm (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 03:16 am (UTC)And, you know, Daniel may have two dozen languages at his fingertips, but Jack's fingers read and speak Daniel fluently. [At least in my universe, he does!]
Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:35 pm (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 03:19 am (UTC)Thank you kindly.
I like offering Daniel on a
platterrug for everybody to enjoy!Re: Beautiful Baby
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:43 pm (UTC)yum
Re: Beautiful Baby
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Date: Jan. 13th, 2009 03:28 am (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
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Date: Jan. 13th, 2009 06:35 am (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
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Date: Jan. 13th, 2009 07:27 pm (UTC)Daniel arches his back and settles back, cradling his head on his arms. He's not stupid. It's not the first time he's arranged himself on the rug and waited for Jack. Even when they're both too tired to fuck, he makes a point of giving himself to Jack with this unmistakable invitation. Even when the only payoff will be a caress, flesh on flesh, before exhaustion forces them both to bed. To well-deserved sleep.
... so much love for that paragraph!
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Date: Jan. 14th, 2009 03:31 am (UTC)Re: Beautiful Baby
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