Anybody awake?

:-) That is to say, is anybody awake and able to do a quick beta on a 550 word J/D NC-17 thingy? I'm mainly concerned as to whether the tense is consistent throughout, or if not consistent, acceptable.

Other comments welcomed of course!

List of good things

I posted the response to my first prompt at phoenix_gate: 'Back Against the Wall'. It's a gen, PG, 710 word look at Chancellor Travell of Tollana and her reaction to 'the JackandDaniel show' as she's in the process of deceiving them during "Between Two Fires". I cross-posted but forgot to mention it in my own journal. *shakes head*

I just ate a handful of grapes. I need to do more of this, every day. Until they're gone. And then buy more fruit.

The broccoli I bought, yeesh, I don't even know how long ago is still in great shape, and was wonderful in the stir-fry I whipped up last night. I think I'll go cut up and cook another head and add it into the leftovers. Ooh, and another head can go into tonight's Tuna Helper, to make it faux-healthy. And I can have grapes for dessert.

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'Reality', Jack/Daniel, NC-17, 550 words

Written for Fetish Friday over at smutday, with the requirements of masturbation and a toy!

You can read it on DW here

or on LJ here