Yes, yes I did. I have opinions on the matter. But Sid did a few things that obviously take her out of the 'bad non-con' category, including telling a story in which the non-con wasn't gratuitous or lightly treated, where the characters were psychologically complex and true to the interesting people we expect them to be, and using the trauma to tell the greater, interesting, story, and paying it off. You did good, Sid. Not least for being gracious about all my comments.
Yeah, the non-con wasn't gratuitous, wasn't dismissed easily, and was an integral part of the bigger picture. You can win me over with that kind of thing.
Much gratitude to my alpha-beta, Minxy.
And omega, man! It's aaaaaaall about me! (you're welcome *g*)
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Yes, yes I did. I have opinions on the matter. But Sid did a few things that obviously take her out of the 'bad non-con' category, including telling a story in which the non-con wasn't gratuitous or lightly treated, where the characters were psychologically complex and true to the interesting people we expect them to be, and using the trauma to tell the greater, interesting, story, and paying it off. You did good, Sid. Not least for being gracious about all my comments.
Yeah, the non-con wasn't gratuitous, wasn't dismissed easily, and was an integral part of the bigger picture. You can win me over with that kind of thing.
Much gratitude to my alpha-beta, Minxy.
And omega, man! It's aaaaaaall about me! (you're welcome *g*)