actually, that would be a cool device to mess with and I realized that after I became enamoured of the last lines I had written. I lacked the desire to go back and reincorporate other subtle baseball references.
so do you like to mess with words purely for the pleasure of seeing how you can contort an idea while still feeding a plot/character line or are you all about the actual plot (and occasionally, delightful lack-thereof) and character development?
Re: Accentuate the Obvious
actually, that would be a cool device to mess with and I realized that after I became enamoured of the last lines I had written. I lacked the desire to go back and reincorporate other subtle baseball references.
so do you like to mess with words purely for the pleasure of seeing how you can contort an idea while still feeding a plot/character line or are you all about the actual plot (and occasionally, delightful lack-thereof) and character development?