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JACK/DANIEL BABY-A-THON (no infants allowed)

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It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.

This is more-or-less how it will work:

You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.

THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.

Let’s wallow, baby!

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So'm I. They're much better together than apart.

Jack may be Special Ops, but he can learn a thing or two from Daniel in the sneakiness department.

Remember the old Simon and Garfunkle song, "Bookends"?

Shoot. I'm feeling ficcy all the sudden and I have many other things to do.

Jack just needed Daniel to take the first step, it seems.

Apropos of absolutely nothing, I wanted to poke you about a beta. It's original fic, but it's kinky as heck, so it's not something my usual betas would touch. Help me,

sidlj, you're my only hope!

No, write more fic!

(Because, I'd be totally tempted to write "Bookends"!Jack/Daniel, otherwise. And I have too many other fic to write.)

Awwww. I liked all the staring back and forth. And being honest with each other.

And this, from Part 1, made me giggle (even insanely):

"Aht." Jack raised his 'don't argue' finger. "No, Daniel, you'll just go back to bed and sleep off the meds you finally took last night. This is just a "Colorado flurry" and I am an Air Force Colonel and equal to the task of moving a little snow." Jack drew himself up to his full height, puffed out his chest & raised his eyebrows for good measure.

It's good to know that Jack's military training and experience make him super qualified to shovel snow.
::cackles with glee::

Great song about old friends. Could be slash or gen.

*whimper*

You want to write it, or should I? :D

LOL!!!

Definitely worth the moment of "Oh God, did I totally fuck that up?"

Thank you!

Shoot, why don't we each do our own.

Here's the challenge (I know, when the hell did this become a challenge?): The only thing that *can* be used from the song, is that one image of them sitting on a park bench, bundled up for cold/coldish weather. Can be "present" day or future!fic. Oh, and the feeling of strangeness about their ages... shoot, I've felt that and I'm just pushing 50.

"... Get in line, buddy. Fucking like a fallen angel wins no privileges here.”

BWAHAHA!

It doesn't?
Daniel should make Jack sleep on the couch for that!

But, oh, boys.
::grins and is happy for them::

And then there's the post-workout, um, workout. ;-)

“Now shut up and let me work, you big baby!”

“That’s Colonel Big Baby,” retorted Jack, “and that’s what you get for taking my stuff.”

::giggles::

I love it when dialogue snark includes the presumed insult tacked on to the "Colonel".

Oh, boys and their toys.

Thank you for making me laugh. I needed it!

"If...if you want me, that is." For the first time since this all started, Daniel looked nervous.

Oh! I loved this, how Daniel can vacillate between being bold and devious and then suddenly unsure of himself.

Thank you for showing us even more facets of Daniel.

Hey, I'll be happy to look at it for you, assuming it's not novel length or anything. I don't really ever think of myself as a beta, but I guess I don't totally suck at it!

There’s nothing but silence on the other end of the phone, although Jack imagines he can hear the slow, confused blink of Daniel’s eyes. He knows Daniel wants this, knows it like he knows the longing in his own heart, but the pause from Colorado gives him just enough time to doubt, to mentally move to Minnesota instead of home where he belongs before there’s a puff of air like Daniel’s letting out a breath he’s been holding for more than a decade

That's possibly the most jam-packed silence I've ever experienced. See my huge sigh of relief that Daniel understands Jack.

Sorry for the pathetic attempt but I wanted to contribute and this is the crap that spewed forth.

What do you say? Dinner, baby?

Jack shook his head in frustration. Yeah, that'll catch the guy. Sound sleazy. He threw the bouncy bal at the wall again. It hit with a smack! and ricocheted back towards Jack. The colonel caught it automatically, his mind still on the problem of asking one Dr. Daniel 'Don't Tell Me What to Do' Jackson out on a date.

Hey... baby! How's about we get down and dirty? Jack sighed and dropped his head into his hands, the bouncy ball pushing into his left eyeball.

"Smooth, Jack. Very smooth. And what's with your damn fixation on calling Daniel baby?"

"You like to call me baby, Jack?"

Jack whirled around, shock spreading across his face. There, just behind Jack, stood Daniel, a smirk spreading across his face. The archaeologist's eyes twinkled as he said, "I hope it's not because you think I should still be in diapers."

Jack just stared. Daniel pushed off from the door and walked slowly towards his team leader. "But from the blush creeping across your face, I'd say it was the sexy baby. Am I right? Baby."

Daniel kicked the door shut.

END.

Sounds good.

(And here is where I giggle and say that I'm 21 and know S&G secondhand from my parents. And yet, it's easy enough to feel old at times.)

It's short (700 words exactly). And it doesn't need editing so much as to be told if it works. Preference of e-mail addy for me to use?

GAH! I'm surrounded by children. ;-):-)

I, on the other hand, am like your folks. I grew up listening to them. :-)

And yeah, I held my first niece when I was 19... suddenly felt ancient. :-) My *hands* looked so old next to that newborn skin.

Daniel is, despite everything, still human.

Most of the time, anyway. :-);-)

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