I like that the phone tag and screening of messages and subliminal content in the voice mail messages are playing out the stages of grief - denial (avoidance also) and anger, in the messages, bargaining and depression in and after the dinners on to acceptance in the final phone call. You're so smart!

This got a snort of laughter: Yeah, he probably should’ve asked if Bjorn knew how to play poker first.


And the line the love in Daniel’s eyes had been unmistakable broke my heart. It's not even an "aaaw" moment, it's just a punch and a gasp.

Wonderful work! Thanks.