"What did one wear to a spanking?" OMG, I absolutely love that line! Not sure if this is meant to be a prequel to 'Intensity" (kinda dived headfirst into the story), but I sure am imagining that it is. I don't quite know how the interaction between Jack and Daniel is onscreen as I've only seen the both of them separately on SGA. I imagine that Jack would be the one with the more forceful personality complete with sarcastic quips at every moment whereas Daniel is the kind of nerdy eccentric guy? Can't wait to read more of this.