ext_1138 ([identity profile] starting-gate.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sid 2006-09-08 06:49 pm (UTC)

#1 just perfect, felt so authentic

#3 love this, would like to see more 'flashback' stuff for Jack, the memories all the bdsm stuff revive have gotta be interesting. I like the blindfold wariness, always adds another dimension to your fic

#5 I was laughing by the first paragraph, I though Jack was gonna wet the bed!
I mean, come on! I love that line, and have no expanation.

Love these

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