Oh, I'm very glad you said that! My alternate ending was something along the lines of Jack saying, "That's enough yardwork; what do you want to do now?"
But I drew a blank when it came to Daniel's possible response (although a deep blush springs to mind).
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But I drew a blank when it came to Daniel's possible response (although a deep blush springs to mind).
So I'm happy this ending worked for you!