sid: (J/D duo)
sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2008-12-28 06:02 pm
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'Q&A', a Jack/Daniel triple drabble, R

Q: What's the opposite of fluffy?

A: This.

300 words, set between Seasons 8 and 9.  J/D established relationship.

Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] melayneseahawk  and [livejournal.com profile] tesserae  for help and reassurance.  :-)

 

Q&A

Jack scrubs an agitated hand through his hair. “What exactly do you want?”

 

It isn’t the first time he’s asked that question. The first time, the answer was, “You,” and a thrill skittered down Jack’s spine at the heat in Daniel’s eyes.

 

After Daniel descended the answer was, “Us,” and Jack knew he meant more to Daniel than he’d realized. Daniel wanted to recapture what they’d been to each other. Jack was something more than an object or an outlet or a project. Maybe one day he’d learn exactly what he was to Daniel. Maybe Daniel would even tell him.

 

Maybe pigs will fly.

 

Now, standing in Jack’s kitchen, Daniel’s answer is, “I want you to take the Washington job.”

 

Daniel never interferes in Jack’s career. Jack doesn’t need his permission to accept a promotion.

 

This is Daniel sending him away.

 

“So, it’s over?”

 

Daniel steps in close, eyes glittering. He slides his hand around Jack’s throat and applies mild pressure. “It’s not over unless I say it’s over.”

 

Jack feels arousal swirl, low in his belly. He takes in a breath through his nose and smells Daniel’s aftershave, the one Jack gave him last birthday. He shudders and begins to harden. “Okay. Just checking.” He licks his lips.  Waits.

 

Daniel’s hand tightens. “It’s never going to be over, Jack. Just so you know.” He releases his grip.  His hand moves to Jack’s shoulder, fingers tapping. 

 

Jack hurries to reply, letting all his relief show in his face and eyes. “That’s good to know.”  And if Daniel wants to read love into that….

 

“I’d keep you here if we didn’t need you there.” Daniel pulls him in tight, speaks gruffly into his ear. “I’ll miss you.”

 

“Likewise,” Jack gasps, as his hips begin to grind out his impossible, uncontrollable need.

 


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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-12-28 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*Yeeeeessssssssss*!


Reader's Tip: Do not click on this while 'listening' to your teenager rattle on about, well, about anything teenagers tend to rattle on about.

Just don't.

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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
The cognitive dissonance made my head all 'splody. :-)
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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
But the hot factor made it all worthwhile.

I still have no idea what the kid was rattling on about. ;-);-)
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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
Nope, no signatures. I just hope I didn't agree to something stupid, though. ;-) I don't think the word "driving" was mentioned.
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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
Of course, there's always the Autocratic Maternal "NO!". :-)
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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
We'll talk about driving lessons next summer. She knows that. (And I'm rarely autocratic - don't believe in it - as a result, I've got a reasonable kid - amazing that. :-)
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[personal profile] kazbaby 2008-12-29 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
I love this to bits but I'd have to say that this is my favorite line: “I’d keep you here if we didn’t need you there.”

Just because it feels as if no matter what Jack and Daniel are to each other, and that's obvious a great deal, SG-1 is a greater part of them because it encompasses both of them, their past.
(i really hopes that makes sense)

[identity profile] cadencecascade.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
YES. This is the ONLY REASON that Jack actually let them send him to the Pentagon.

Oh my my my.

“It’s not over unless I say it’s over.”

That's just perfect. B/c while they're equal partners in their relationship, Jack's the one that's worried the most about appearances and he doesn't even want to give the appearance, even to himself and Daniel, that he's running roughshod over Daniel at all. And Daniel, while not wanting to hurt Jack or Lord over him, has no such hesitance (for lack of a better word).

mmhmm. like I said. perfect.

[identity profile] djaddict.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
Very, very well done!!

[identity profile] chattycatsmeow.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
Not soft. Not fluffy. But quite interesting. Glad you posted.
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[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/tesserae_/ 2008-12-29 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Great piece, and I love the change you made on it - makes it even darker somehow... *g*

[identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
*fans self*

[identity profile] dragojustine.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
This is pretty astonishingly hot for being so compressed, and it works so well for me as a fix-it!

[identity profile] jacknlizabeth.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
I like how you set this up in the normalcy of the kitchen and let us experience this through Jack. What sticks in my mind is Jack registering Daniel's aftershave. Refreshing to read a different kind of interaction between Jack and Daniel.
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[identity profile] stagnation13.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Meeeps. Loves it. The boys!

I read it twice. I had too. All dominant Daniel, then he kinda collapses with his, "I'll miss you". Oy.

“Likewise,” Jack gasps, as his hips begin to grind out his impossible, uncontrollable need. *quivers* Oh. My.

Jack was something more than an object or an outlet or a project. Maybe one day he’d learn exactly what he was to Daniel. Maybe Daniel would even tell him.

Maybe pigs will fly.
I wanna know!!! Tell, tell!
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[identity profile] discodiva76.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 09:13 am (UTC)(link)
*sighs happily*....

My fandom is all good....

Thank you hon...it's brilliant!!


Deeds xx

[identity profile] antares04a.livejournal.com 2008-12-29 10:11 am (UTC)(link)
What a rollercoaster of feelings for Jack! I think he must be devasted the moment he fears that this is the end to their relationship. What a relief Daniel's next words must be for him.
And then, at the end, Daniel's cryptic way to say that he loves him - and Jack's immediate reaction of his body to this.
Perfect! I love every line of it.
lolmac: (Smarmy)

[personal profile] lolmac 2008-12-29 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohh, fantastic. Lovely, lovely rich D/s there! Beautiful work.

(Also howled at the Tejas thread.)
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[personal profile] lolmac 2008-12-30 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Puppies and rainbows, forsooth. :P

I suppose it would seem ugly to someone who doesn't 'get' D/s -- it would have freaked me out completely not that many years ago. (I'm remembering a friend of mine who defines edgeplay as anything that "an ordinary person, on seeing it, would immediately want to beat the crap out of whoever's doing it".) (Then he looks at me and tries to make me feel guilty.)
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[personal profile] sarkka 2008-12-29 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
oh yeah =)
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[personal profile] paian 2008-12-30 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Great take on their situation at that time in the series -- a unique and fascinating and chilling take on why Jack took that job! -- and wonderful execution. Owwcch + mmmmm.
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[personal profile] paian 2008-12-30 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm partial to the thought that Jack was leaning away from it. Makes the force of Daniel's leaning him into it more significant. (Hm, leaning ... 'Inclination' resonance there!) But why he might have been leaning away or towards ... well, that's how more fic is born! *g* (Characters don't 'talk' to me -- I don't anthropomorphize the constructs of characters that way as a writing tool -- so most times I need to write the story to find out the answer to a question like that. :-) Not to noooodge you into doing that, but I sure wouldn't mind if you did!)

Oh, and so happy to see you use that icon! :-)
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[personal profile] paian 2008-12-30 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, well -- secrets can be half the fun! The way the silences in music can be as important as the parts the composer and musicians fill with sound. :-)

[identity profile] justhuman.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet! Liked this one lots

[identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. You kill me with your words. Especially these: "I’d keep you here if we didn’t need you there.”
Nice work. :-)

[identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com 2009-01-02 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
Would I be wrong in thinking this is 'Absolute Power' Daniel?

[identity profile] wicca-faith-fi.livejournal.com 2009-03-11 11:12 pm (UTC)(link)
nice!!