sid | JACK/DANIEL BABY-A-THON (no infants allowed)

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JACK/DANIEL BABY-A-THON (no infants allowed)

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It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.

This is more-or-less how it will work:

You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.

THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.

Let’s wallow, baby!

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The fire is flickering, more illusion than substance, when Jack walks out of the bathroom, towelling off his wet hair. But he's not cold – not when his gaze stutters and is transfixed by the pale beauty of Daniel lying face down on the rug.

Daniel's limbs are loose, languid. No wonder, as Daniel was the first to arrive and managed to ease away the tension of yet another week from hell, courtesy of planet M-whatever-the-fuck its official designation is. At least he had the courtesy to leave some hot water for Jack.

Jack wanders over, bare feet slapping lightly on the floor. He keeps staring, afraid to break the trance he appears to be in. Daniel's body ... his body gleams in the firelight. Jack doesn't know how Daniel gets away with it. No matter how dirty or bruised Daniel is when he manages to throw himself (when he's lucky, and dragged unconscious when he's not) back through the safety of the Stargate, those pale globes are perfect. Jack thinks about his own scarred butt and snorts. His own might not be like a work of art, but he's the only one who is allowed to appreciate the vision laid out before him.

And so he does, dropping with a bitten-off grunt onto battle-weary knees. The position is appropriate, as he worships at Daniel's body. But not that Daniel is exactly aware of that. Still, occasionally, Jack does let an endearment slip as he fondles the warm, smooth cheeks with both palms.

Daniel rouses, lashes fluttering in confusion. “J'ck?”

“Yeah. Just ... I just want to....” Jack's hands glide in firm, deliberate circles, as his voice gives out.

Daniel arches his back and settles back, cradling his head on his arms. He's not stupid. It's not the first time he's arranged himself on the rug and waited for Jack. Even when they're both too tired to fuck, he makes a point of giving himself to Jack with this unmistakable invitation. Even when the only payoff will be a caress, flesh on flesh, before exhaustion forces them both to bed. To well-deserved sleep.

But tonight is not quite as tiring. Jack's not passing up the opportunity to touch and feel. Danny's butt is as smooth as a baby's. Without realizing it, he voices the comparison. “You must've been a beautiful baby, lying stark naked on the couch, examining everything with those eyes, wondering how and why and even when.”

Daniel squirms with discomfort. “Jaaaaack,” his voice holds a shadow of warning. His childhood is not something he likes to think about, not even the precious baby years.

Jack doesn't torment him, but leans over to lay his cheek against that part of Daniel that he finds so perfect. As Daniel relaxes once again, Jack thinks to himself, no matter, Danny, you'll always be my beautiful baby.

Oh, Jack! He's so much in awe of his lover. And he knows when not to push it, too, which is good, because he wouldn't want Daniel getting snippy at a moment like this.

Such a nice final image. *sighs contentedly*

Oh, thank you. I'm fond of the image, myself. Dying fire, rug, nekkid Daniel with nekkid Jack arriving onto the scene. And, please, blame

janedavitt (hee - I blame her entirely for getting me into the Stargate fandom at all) as I read her spankingfic and decided on a more innocent version.

Thank you, also, for easing our withdrawal symptoms this weekend. I'll survive, in my own delusional way, with my fixed McShep goggles firmly in place.

Eek - post midnight hugs,
'lenka

Re: Beautiful Baby

sid - 2009-01-11 06:04 (UTC) - Expand

I really like the image of Daniel,nude, in the flickering light of the fire. Mmmmmm.....

Re: Beautiful Baby

helenkacan.livejournal.com - 2009-01-16 01:11 (UTC) - Expand

Oh, this was so sweet and tiredly loving, the way a couple can be. Loved that Daniel's giving Jack the visual Jack wants even if he's too tired for more.

And you, dear beautiful Jane, inspired it. As I keep reminding you, I wouldn't even be in this fandom if it weren't for you.

And ::giggles:: I thought of following up with a bit of innocence to counter your naughtiness!

As for the tiredly loving, I think the epsom salts must've seeped into the ficlet.

Always hugs for you,
'lenka

Daniel will never grasp how beautiful he really is......luckily he's got Jack to tell him forever!!!...

Deeds xx

Especially if Jack keeps talking with his hands.

Mmmmm. This was fun.
Thank you for reading and ... appreciating.

Jack absolutely adores his archeologist.

As it should be.

This was great!

Who ... wha' ... oh, sorry, I was just distracted myself by the yummy sight.

I'm so pleased you liked it. I just tossed it off on the spur of the moment, but, yes, adoration fits the mood perfectly.

Very nice! I love the image of Daniel on that rug in front of the fire very much. But I think it was a clever decision on Jack's part not to say the last words out loud. *g*

Oh, I'm so pleased you liked it.

And, hey, Jack's not stupid. After all, Daniel might just cover up and not be so ... available. Which would make everybody very, very sad. And that would be bad.

Awww, sweet and gentle and Mmmm, in front of a fire, stretched out on a rug.
Sorry, I'll be good now.

No, no, no, you don't have to be good.
It's much more fun being naughty and ... imagining.

Thank you for the Awww and Mmmm; now I feel all warm and fuzzy myself, even though there's no fire ... or Daniel ... or Jack. ::sighs::

Lovely loving feel to this.
Thanks for writing. :-)

Thank you for reading.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

And - yes - I was trying to capture the loving feel without being overtly sexual. Because there are SO many ways to interpret what baby means between two people.

Lovely, lovely vision of Jack just being in love and knowing exactly the right time to back off and be in the moment.

Thank you for the lovely words of praise.

And, you know, Daniel may have two dozen languages at his fingertips, but Jack's fingers read and speak Daniel fluently. [At least in my universe, he does!]

Aw, how sweet.

::giggles::

Thank you kindly.
I like offering Daniel on a ~~platter~~ rug for everybody to enjoy!

very visually appealing...well written with all that firelight and worshipping and stuff...
yum

Re: Beautiful Baby

helenkacan.livejournal.com - 2009-01-12 03:22 (UTC) - Expand

Really nice imagery! And I liked how it wasn't always just about sex for them- makes it all so much more intimate :)

Re: Beautiful Baby

helenkacan.livejournal.com - 2009-01-13 07:49 (UTC) - Expand

So sweet! You really painted a beautiful picture with your words.

Re: Beautiful Baby

helenkacan.livejournal.com - 2009-01-13 07:56 (UTC) - Expand

Lovely ficlet. And ...

Daniel arches his back and settles back, cradling his head on his arms. He's not stupid. It's not the first time he's arranged himself on the rug and waited for Jack. Even when they're both too tired to fuck, he makes a point of giving himself to Jack with this unmistakable invitation. Even when the only payoff will be a caress, flesh on flesh, before exhaustion forces them both to bed. To well-deserved sleep.

... so much love for that paragraph!

Re: Beautiful Baby

helenkacan.livejournal.com - 2009-01-13 22:54 (UTC) - Expand

What awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This entire commentfic series is making me all melty.

Re: Beautiful Baby

helenkacan.livejournal.com - 2009-01-14 05:21 (UTC) - Expand

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