sid: (Rodney)
sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2006-06-20 09:30 pm
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'The Outrage', SGA, John/Rodney, rated G

I don't know where I came up with this idea.  There's a lot of SGA fanfic out there that I've never read, but I can't help but wonder:  is this story a first?

SGA, John/Rodney, rated G, 567 words

Something bad happens to John on a mission...

 

THE OUTRAGE  

When Sheppard’s team came back through the stargate, they were greeted with shocked silence. Elizabeth came racing down the stairs from her office. “John! Are you all right?” Her concerned eyes swept over him.

“I’m fine,” he answered, but he couldn’t quite meet her eyes.

“What happened?” she demanded to know.

“The Viranians were…unfriendly,” Teyla said, her anger showing on her face. “They captured us, and they assaulted Colonel Sheppard.”

“I’m fine,” Sheppard repeated, jaw set in a grim line.

“Yes, yes, of course you are,” Rodney said, looking worried. “But I think we should let Carson see that for himself.”

“Yes,” Elizabeth agreed, “we can debrief later. You should report to the infirmary. Now.”

“I’d really rather just go to my quarters and rest,” John said in a flat voice.

“Colonel. You know the rules.”

~~~~

“Carson? You have a report on Colonel Sheppard’s condition for me?”

“Elizabeth, yes, sit down.” Dr. Beckett invited. “He’s gone to his quarters to rest for a while. He’s still in a state of shock.”

“Yes, of course he is,” Elizabeth said sadly. “I saw bruises. Is he very badly injured?”

“No, thank goodness. He struggled…” Carson broke off, and cleared his throat noisily. “He’ll be quite sore for a few days, but he’ll heal quickly.”

“Physically.”

“Aye.” Carson grimaced.

Elizabeth leaned forward in her chair. “And what about his emotional state?”

“He was assaulted, Elizabeth. And…disfigured. It will take some time for him to get over what was done to him.”

“So, medical stand down for an undetermined length of time?”

“I don’t see any other choice.”

“No. Neither do I. Thank you, Carson.” Elizabeth stood up.

“I just wish there was something more I could do,” the doctor said, shaking his head.

“John is going to need all his friends. We’ll get him through this,” Elizabeth said with determination.

“Aye. We will,” Carson agreed, looking somewhat less mournful. “He’s a strong lad. He just needs some time.”

~~~~

John was lying curled up on his bed when Rodney quietly entered the room. Rodney saw his back stiffen, but he didn’t turn over. “Can’t sleep?”

“Didn’t really expect to,” John admitted.

“No, I guess not,” Rodney muttered, kicking off his shoes. He moved to the other side of the bed, and laid down facing his lover. John blinked wet lashes at him. “Oh, hey!” Rodney said anxiously.

John sniffed loudly, and swiped at his nose with his sleeve. “I can’t seem to stop,” he confessed, his cheeks flushing.

“No, I don’t suppose you can,” Rodney said, taking John into his arms very gently. “I may do some crying myself at some point.”

“Why?” John said with more than a little bitterness. “It didn’t happen to you.”

“Because I love you, stupid.” Rodney gave John a small, tentative kiss.

“I know I’m being a huge baby about this,” John said, making a hiccupping sound, “but I can’t help it.”

“No one expects you to just shrug this off! You were assaulted, for God’s sake, and in a very personal way.” Rodney tightened his arms around the other man.

“I’m fine!” John protested, but two tears slid down his face, as if determined to prove him wrong.

“You will be,” Rodney told him. “You will be. But not tonight.”

John gave a sob, and buried his face in Rodney’s neck.

Rodney stroked John’s bare scalp tenderly. “It’ll grow back,” he promised.

THE END

 

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
bwaaaa hahaha You are so evil. heee

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[identity profile] trollsttroll.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 01:59 am (UTC)(link)
*dies laughing*

Oh God! That was hilarious! And him crying about it!

Hehehehe!

[identity profile] or-mabinogi.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! I was wondering where you going with this. that last line killed me. I think I choked on my ice tea.

[identity profile] jackluvsdaniel.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
OMFG Sid! I think I need a new keyboard. *mops up water* LMAO, that was too funny. <3

[identity profile] slash-whore27.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my god! That was so damn funny! My mind kept thinking of these horrible transgressions (the g rating kinda curtailed that though), but I didn't think of the hair. That famous, unruly hair. Ha! I'm still laughing. :)

[identity profile] polly-b.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
:thud:

Bwahahaha!

In some fandoms, this would mean war...

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[identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
Bwahahaha!

[identity profile] katling73.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
*cries laughing*

OMG, you are evil! I was sitting there wondering just what the hell had happened. All sorts of awful things were running through my mind.

Still, oh no! Not the hair! Rodney's right though. It will grow back.

[identity profile] wymsie.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
Priceless!!

I was groaning as I read the stilted conversations and use of the word "assaulted" over and over. Oh no, not another one of those fics...but, then the last line changed everything. I about died laughing. Brilliant delivery! LOL

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ext_1142: zooey deschanel (i know you know everything)

[identity profile] overchay.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
oddly enough, i got to "“I know I’m being a huge baby about this,” John said, making a hiccupping sound, “but I can’t help it.”" and I immediately started to DIE because I KNEW it had to be his HAIR. Because anything serious couldn't possibly have that kind of reaction from Sheppard ;[

this. was. priceless >:]]]

[identity profile] jaekayelle.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
Howl! I was wondering where you were going with this. Assaulted? But Carson didn't keep him in the infirmary. Beat up really badly? Again, he got to go to his quarters. Aha! You hit him where it really hurts. *giggles insanely*

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[identity profile] indigorhapsody.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, poor John. *g* Though I would seriously cry if that happened to me, the thought of John Sheppard crying over something like that is hysterical. Especially since his hair already seems to have a life of its own. :)

[identity profile] tex.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
This was excellent! I was so sucked into this, worrying about poor John and his "disfigurement"! Great idea!

[identity profile] queenriley.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
OMG that was great! I had so many horrible scenarios going through my head. I was getting all tense and nervous, serious... wondering what it was.

Then I got to the end. Water actually squirted out my nose and I laughed so hard I woke up my sleeping 9 month old baby across the room. He, sadly, didn't find it nearly as funny as I did... but at least he went back to sleep.

Thank you for this story! It's fantastic.

[identity profile] trika.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
Did not see that one coming, Sid! You are a sick woman. I love that about you! :D V. funny!

[identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
OMG!! LMAO!! I so did not see that coming!

[identity profile] hrroyalgeekness.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
::is ded from laughter and waking up my parents::

You're so evil!

[identity profile] alizarin-nyc.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man. You got me! I never saw it coming!

I wrote a fic that had Rodney dying of radiation poisoning (yeah, I know, teh angst!) and the team shaved their heads for him.

But this? This is new!

[identity profile] anjak-j.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 07:37 am (UTC)(link)
You are a sick, sick woman! That is a million kinds of the evil...

I. Love. It. And by proxy, you...

*And [livejournal.com profile] smuffster for reccing it...

[identity profile] ereini0n.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
OMG!!!! I knew it! So funny! And sad at the same time. :)

[identity profile] alipeeps.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 08:26 am (UTC)(link)
Aww man that's just evil! I was conjuring up all sorts of awful scenarious for what had been done to poor Sheppy and that that last line just slapped me in the face! You wicked wicked person! *lol* :D

[identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 08:34 am (UTC)(link)
LMAO-very nice play on h/c fics.

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You are brilliant!

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[identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com 2006-06-21 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
:snerk: Oh, you're evil. But in the meantime, after a day or so of stubble, everyone will be playing 'touch the stubble', since it always feels so nice.

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