sid: (Jack gray shirt)
sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2006-09-09 11:05 pm
Entry tags:

The Sweat Of His Brow, J/D, PG

Daniel's having a pleasant little daydream...

J/D, PG, ~450 words

THE SWEAT OF HIS BROW

Daniel closed his eyes and pictured Jack in his gray tee-shirt. Jack had had that shirt as long as Daniel had known him, and it was worn and soft from countless washings. At least it looked soft. Daniel had never actually touched it, but he had wanted to, often. But now, with his eyes closed, if he really concentrated he could imagine how it would feel, the softness over the hard body...

Jack is a little bit sweaty; he’s been working in his yard. When Daniel touches his chest, the tee-shirt is warm from the sun. Daniel presses his palm over Jack’s heart and feels it begin to beat a little faster. He lets his hand roam, and feels hard nipples poking up beneath the cotton. He steps to the side and moves his hand to Jack’s shoulder. Muscle and bone. He can smell clean sweat. He’s close enough to see every...individual...eyelash.

Daniel groaned quietly, and his own lashes fluttered.

His hand moves to Jack’s strong back, and, as he strokes up and down it appreciatively, he feels the fabric catch slightly against the damp skin it covers. Jack’s body is radiating heat, and Daniel’s body is responding. Sweat beads at Jack’s temple, and Daniel leans in and presses his lips against the moist flesh, catching the droplet as it begins to fall. He tastes salt and feels smooth, warm, slick skin. He feels Jack quiver against him. He lifts his head and sees Jack looking at him from the corner of his eye. He shifts his focus to Jack’s mouth, to thin, expressive lips, slightly parted.

Daniel’s own lips curved, and he licked them, almost able to taste that lingering drop of imaginary sweat.

He moves to face Jack, sliding his left arm around his waist, and the other over his shoulder. The fingers of his right hand explore the short, wet hair at Jack’s nape. Jack’s eyes stare hungrily at his mouth. He moves closer; their chests press together; Jack’s body heat encompasses him. His lips hover millimeters from Jack’s. Their breath intermingles; Jack’s arms are pulling him closer; Jack is murmuring his name...

“Daniel?”

“What?” Daniel’s eyes shot open, and he stared up from his deck chair to where Jack stood over him.

Jack grinned. “You were asleep, weren’t you? What’d you do, stay up all night reading something boring?”

“No,” Daniel shifted in his chair. “And I wasn’t asleep.”

“Sure,” Jack said agreeably. “Whatever you say.” He sank down into the chair next to Daniel and picked up his bottle of water. As he drank thirstily, Daniel watched his throat work, watched sweat trickle down his face and neck to be soaked up by the worn gray tee-shirt.

Daniel’s fingers twitched.

THE END

Sequel: http://sidlj.livejournal.com/46236.html

[identity profile] wraith816.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Dear Daniel,

Just jump him already!

Love, the slashers


;-)

[identity profile] wraith816.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
*holds up trophy*

I'd like to thank the THINGers for their moral support, and Sid, for her fics, without which, I wouldn't be here today. I'd also like to thank Jack and Daniel for being so incredibly hot, especially when they're naked and doing dirty things to each other. Thank you all! *blows kisses at the audience*

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/ 2006-09-10 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Um... nice icon.

I'll be in my bunk.

[identity profile] starting-gate.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Mouth-wateringly delicious, tasty, hot.
Reminds me of someone...
;-)

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
mmmm.....oh, and I agree with the slashers. :D Jump him already, Daniel!

[identity profile] pixie-hollow.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 06:32 am (UTC)(link)
ZOMG!! Write a continuation with Daniel jumping Jack. Liek, right now.

[identity profile] pixie-hollow.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, that was so awesome. That made my day. You rock totally hardcore ^^

[identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
I should have known that if you were writing pre-slash it would still be panty-wetting! (And I wouldn't mind seeing how Daniel gets from fantasy to reality either ;-)

[identity profile] gaidheil1974.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm. Nice. *waits patiently for Jacks's POV and then....*

[identity profile] gaidheil1974.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh come on! Jack needs to have a nice little fantasy about working up a sweat and the reception he *might* get! lol

[identity profile] gaidheil1974.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
:O Oh, the images that brings to mind!

[identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm, mmm, mmm! As hot as ever!

[identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
So. Damn. Hot.

Grab him, Daniel!
paian: blank white (sweet (& hot))

[personal profile] paian 2006-09-10 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Yummy. :-)

[identity profile] secretbutterfly.livejournal.com 2006-09-11 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Of COURSE, didn't you know? ;-) LOL
Seriously though, who wouldn't want to lick sweat off a sexy man like that, hmm?

[identity profile] secretbutterfly.livejournal.com 2006-09-13 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
WORD! LOL

[identity profile] troyswann.livejournal.com 2006-09-10 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, that's loverly. And the last line is terrific. :)
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[personal profile] ivorygates 2006-09-10 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Squeak!
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[personal profile] ivorygates 2006-09-11 02:10 pm (UTC)(link)
t-shirt sex....
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[personal profile] ivorygates 2006-09-13 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
True Love Will Never Die...
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[personal profile] ivorygates 2006-09-16 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
(contemplates sapfic)

[identity profile] secretbutterfly.livejournal.com 2006-09-11 07:07 am (UTC)(link)
I. Loved. That.

*nods*

[identity profile] nangi-akki.livejournal.com 2006-09-11 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
ooooh - such lovely attention to detail.
I'm waiting for the next part where Daniel tackles Jack to the ground and has his wicked way with him :)

[identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 07:11 am (UTC)(link)
As good as this is, it could use a sequel. //nods//

[identity profile] whimsicalwhims.livejournal.com 2007-01-27 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, what a nice daydream. :)