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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2006-11-10 06:28 pm
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Tell and Show, J/D drabble, rated R

Ooh.  D/s.  100 words.

TELL AND SHOW

 

Jack exhaled.  A distressed sound escaped him.

 

“Uncomfortable?” Daniel asked immediately.

 

“Mmm.”

 

“Uncomfortable in a good way?”

 

Jack moaned.

 

“Good,” Daniel said softly, stroking Jack’s hair.

 

Jack licked his lips.  “Can I come?”

 

Daniel’s eyes widened.  “Just from this?” he exclaimed.  “I wish you would!”

 

Jack rocked his hips.  “Tell me,” he groaned.

 

Daniel bent close.  “Come for me,” he whispered.  “Show me; I want to watch.  Do it, Jack, do it!”

 

Waves of painful pleasure swamped Jack.  Crying out, he came.

 

When he grew quiet, Daniel reached for the toy between his lover’s legs.  “Guess this one’s a keeper.”