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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2006-03-30 01:01 pm
Entry tags:

"Acceptable Losses", drabble, J/D, PG

Daniel gets something off his chest. *g*

Drabble, J/D, PG
now with title!


ACCEPTABLE LOSSES

“I miss breasts,” Daniel sighed.

The tongue that was lapping at his nipple paused. Jack raised his head. “Well, I’m not getting transplants, so forget it.”

Daniel blinked. “Implants,” he corrected.

“Either. I mean neither.” Jack scowled. “Just no!”

Daniel’s eyes widened. “Oh, no, no,” he soothed. He stroked his fingers through Jack’s chest hair lovingly. “Because, really, you’d have to shave. And I wouldn’t like that.”

They exchanged smiles. “Good,” Jack murmured.

“It’s just, sometimes…”

Jack caressed Daniel’s smooth chest reverently. “I know.” His eyelids drooped as he lowered his head again. “I guess we’ll just have to suffer.”

THE END


title suggested by [livejournal.com profile] lucifrix

[identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com 2006-03-30 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggle* How about "Breasts" as the title?

[identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com 2006-03-30 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, that left me smiling. Love them chatting like this.
paian: Jack and Daniel, caption 'come what may' (jd come what may)

[personal profile] paian 2006-03-30 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I can so totally see this conversation happening exactly like this. Thanks for the smile. :-)

[identity profile] amnellwyvern.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
*giggle* Poor suffering men. Hey, how about "Suffering" for a title? *snicker*

[identity profile] crossbow1.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
"Abreast of the Situation"

And your icon gives me a heart attack.

[identity profile] lt-kitty.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Trade-Off or Trade-Offs
Off My Chest
Off His Chest
Bosom Buddies
Breast Friends

[identity profile] sorcha-gaia.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
This was very sweet - and I like how they acknowledge the other gender, and how it used to figure in their lives.

Title, hmmm .... "No Shaving Cream Required"? *grin*

[identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved that! :)

[identity profile] spyderqueen.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Holy crap, you're THAT Sid. *friends like woah*


Oh, and this was great too :)

[identity profile] lucifrix.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
How about "Acceptable Losses"? You could even make little drabble series out of it.

Also, as another poster said, "YOU'RE that Sid?!??" I bow at your altar. There's not nearly enough kink in J/D fic anyway, let alone such engrossing, well-written stuff. "How It All Began" absolutely slew me...it's hard to write BDSM anyway, but writing the loving, nonstereotypical kind (where they use one another's names, for example) is even more difficult. My only quibble is that I WANTED watersports. There is NO J/D watersports out there and that makes me very sad. (I'm also more into Dom!Jack, FTR, but this isn't to say I'm not quite fond of your Dom!Daniel.)

Anyway, your writing is terrific. Thanks for sharing your kinkiness with us.

[identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
“I miss breasts,” Daniel sighed.

I've always thought Daniel and Jack would have this exact conversation! *pets the boys*

[identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com 2006-03-31 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Ee, awesome! But I'm shite at titles, so I can't suggest anything. (though I do like [livejournal.com profile] lucifrix's "Acceptable Losses")

[identity profile] belleimani.livejournal.com 2006-04-01 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Heee.
That is all.

[identity profile] belleimani.livejournal.com 2006-04-01 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
You're quiet welcome!

[identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com 2006-04-02 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
*chokes* Fantastic!

[identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com 2006-04-06 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
Tongue, nipple, chest hair, smooth chest.

What more could a girl ask for?

Yum.