"Acceptable Losses", drabble, J/D, PG

[sid]

Daniel gets something off his chest. *g*

Drabble, J/D, PG
now with title!


ACCEPTABLE LOSSES

“I miss breasts,” Daniel sighed.

The tongue that was lapping at his nipple paused. Jack raised his head. “Well, I’m not getting transplants, so forget it.”

Daniel blinked. “Implants,” he corrected.

“Either. I mean neither.” Jack scowled. “Just no!”

Daniel’s eyes widened. “Oh, no, no,” he soothed. He stroked his fingers through Jack’s chest hair lovingly. “Because, really, you’d have to shave. And I wouldn’t like that.”

They exchanged smiles. “Good,” Jack murmured.

“It’s just, sometimes…”

Jack caressed Daniel’s smooth chest reverently. “I know.” His eyelids drooped as he lowered his head again. “I guess we’ll just have to suffer.”

THE END


title suggested by lucifrix

Comments

[sgflutegirl.livejournal.com]

*giggle* How about "Breasts" as the title?

[sid]

*giggle* Or: A Tale of Two Titties? Nah! Yours is better - but I'm hoping for something more subtle. *g*

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

Heh, that left me smiling. Love them chatting like this.

[sid]

:-) And now you have left me smiling! Thanks!

[paian]

I can so totally see this conversation happening exactly like this. Thanks for the smile. :-)

[sid]

You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-)

[amnellwyvern.livejournal.com]

*giggle* Poor suffering men. Hey, how about "Suffering" for a title? *snicker*

[sid]

I thought of "Such Sweet Suffering" (as in, they're NOT), but considering how much BDSM I write, I thought it might just confuse people. :-D

[spyderqueen.livejournal.com]

Holy crap, you're THAT Sid. *friends like woah*


Oh, and this was great too :)

[sid]

LOL! Thank you! Always nice to make a new friend! :-D

[lucifrix.livejournal.com]

How about "Acceptable Losses"? You could even make little drabble series out of it.

Also, as another poster said, "YOU'RE that Sid?!??" I bow at your altar. There's not nearly enough kink in J/D fic anyway, let alone such engrossing, well-written stuff. "How It All Began" absolutely slew me...it's hard to write BDSM anyway, but writing the loving, nonstereotypical kind (where they use one another's names, for example) is even more difficult. My only quibble is that I WANTED watersports. There is NO J/D watersports out there and that makes me very sad. (I'm also more into Dom!Jack, FTR, but this isn't to say I'm not quite fond of your Dom!Daniel.)

Anyway, your writing is terrific. Thanks for sharing your kinkiness with us.

[sid]

*curtsies* *G*

You know, I've been playing with an AU J/d, and it's just possible that they may turn out to be into water sports. I'll think that over. :-)

You're welcome! I will always share the kinkiness, I promise!

[sid]

And the winner is...... *shakes your hand*

[crossbow1.livejournal.com]

"Abreast of the Situation"

And your icon gives me a heart attack.

[sid]

I'm gonna have to sit down with all these title suggestions and actually pick one. *gulp*

Credit Skatergater for the lovely heart-attack-inducing icon. :-)

[lt-kitty.livejournal.com]

Trade-Off or Trade-Offs
Off My Chest
Off His Chest
Bosom Buddies
Breast Friends

[sid]

Ooh, lots of lovely suggestions!! I must remember to credit the source when I manage to choose one! *makes mental note* :-)

[sorcha-gaia.livejournal.com]

This was very sweet - and I like how they acknowledge the other gender, and how it used to figure in their lives.

Title, hmmm .... "No Shaving Cream Required"? *grin*

[sid]

Thank you, and thanks for the title suggestion, too!

I figure men who had been happily married couldn't help but miss breasts. Possibly other things, too. But definitely breasts!!

[whisper99.livejournal.com]

I loved that! :)

[sid]

I'm glad! *beams* :-D

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

“I miss breasts,” Daniel sighed.

I've always thought Daniel and Jack would have this exact conversation! *pets the boys*

[sid]

And, lo, they did! :-) Thanks!

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Ee, awesome! But I'm shite at titles, so I can't suggest anything. (though I do like lucifrix's "Acceptable Losses")

[sid]

Thank you so much! Lots of good suggestions - I need to decide how much humor I want in the title, just to narrow the field. *frowns*

Oh, hell, I'll do that later! :-)

[belleimani.livejournal.com]

Heee.
That is all.

[sid]

*giggle* That's enough, thank you!

[belleimani.livejournal.com]

You're quiet welcome!

[stellahobbit.livejournal.com]

*chokes* Fantastic!

[sid]

*beams* I'm glad you liked it!

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

Tongue, nipple, chest hair, smooth chest.

What more could a girl ask for?

Yum.

[sid]

:-) And we've already got what they're missing, so, yup, a girl could ask for nothing more! Thanks!!