Sid's Closet

Remember Dreamverse? And Bjorn? I've never posted that story other than as chapters, but I have a file now that's almost ready to be posted.

But I've found a couple of errors I want to clean up:

At one point I used 'beg the question' incorrectly:

Jack’s heart clenched. He leaned back in his chair. “Is this conversation over yet?”

“Daniel… but you did not want to talk about Daniel.”

“Please,” Jack said through tight lips.

“I thought you should know these things.”

And didn’t that just beg the question of what Daniel had told Bjorn.

I want to replace the incorrect usage, but I still want to keep the bitter flavor of the original sentence. Somehow, 'didn't that just raise the question...' doesn't seem to work. Does anyone have a suggestion to re-work that sentence and still hang onto Jack's anger?


In a later section, I have Teal'c announcing his need to kel'no'reem. BUT, this is after Daniel descends, so Teal'c is on tretonin and doesn't need to kel'no'reem anymore. Does anyone recall canon references to kel'no'reem post-Season Six? Maybe he desires to kel'no'reem? It's really just an excuse to get Sam and Teal'c out of Jack's house, because PLOT...so he could just decide it's bedtime, it's getting late, he's tired, whatever. Thoughts?

I didn't even realize I was nominated, so a belated thank you to whatever kind person nominated my Dreamverse series.

The Awards site is here, and my story can be found in tbe Other Slash category. The Preview Round is underway, with voting scheduled to begin March 20th.

Thank you to princessofgeeks  and tejas for pom-poms and beta duties. You've both been great throughout this journey and I love you, omg!. :-)

Thank you to all the readers who have stuck with this and given great feedback (or not, because lurkers are nice people, too. *g*)... and welcome to (I hope!) all the new readers who just don't do WIPs.

Chapter One

Chapter Seven


( 'I've Loved You So' )( Chapter 8 of 8 )

The penultimate chapter!

Fabulous icons are by the fabulous magnavox_23. Feel free to take and use them with proper credit to her.

Thanks to princessofgeeks  for the pompom waving and whip cracking. :-D

Chapter One

Chapter Six

 

( 'Though Near or Far' )

Chapter title yet to be determined - feel free to leave suggestions. Thanks to jdjunkie  for pointing my brain towards a title.  :-)

~2000 words.  Thanks to melayneseahawk  for the quick proofread!

Chapter One

Chapter Five

 

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Chapter One: In These Dreams

Chapter Two: Scenes From a Mall

Chapter Three: Rapprochement

~2000 words, rated PG-13.

 

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The long awaited sequel to 'In These Dreams'.

Jack.  Meets.  Bjorn.

This is officially now a WIP.

~3,200 words, PG-13 for language.  My thanks to princessofg  and tejas  for their advice and support.  :-)