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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2006-02-27 03:58 am
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A Double Drabble

Another trip through the quantum mirror.....

J/D, BDSM, NC-17



ALTERNATE ALTERNATIVE LIFESTYLE


Daniel squatted on the table, hands behind his head and legs wide apart. His dark red cock rose rigidly upwards from the ring that encircled its base. The attached ball-stretcher pulled his testicles down, away from his body. The clamps on his chest were hung with weights, making his nipples obscenely long. His face was flushed, his breathing erratic.

Jack reached out, stroking his cock tauntingly with one finger. Daniel groaned into his gag and swayed. Jack seized his chin and looked Daniel in the eye.

Daniel always gave his body willingly to Jack; he enjoyed being his lover’s plaything. But Daniel’s nature was not in the least submissive. There was always a spark in his eye that, perhaps unwittingly, was a direct challenge to Jack. Sometimes, just sometimes, Jack accepted that challenge.

“Hands and knees.” Jack watched as Daniel silently obeyed him. The change in position shifted the weights that dangled from his nipples, and Daniel widened his eyes, moaning as the sore tissue was stretched anew. Jack flicked at one of the weights, making it dance. Daniel winced. Jack smiled.

It always thrilled him right down to his toenails, when he managed to make Daniel say it.

Master.

[identity profile] bugchicklv.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
*worships at your feet*

[identity profile] execknowitall.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
This is such an intriguing perspective.

Just... GUH!

[identity profile] gatechic.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa...uh...wow! Uhm...will there be more?

[identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
They certainly seem to have a relationship that isn't just the Jack/Daniel one we know (and love) swapped round!
Daniel doesn't come across half as subby (that even a word? LOL!) as our Jack.

I guess that means you're gonna be playing with this alternate universe then? Gonna be writing a longer piece? Coz this is like evilly teasing us with such short snippets!

Oh, and I love the title of this ficlet! *g*

[identity profile] execknowitall.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmm... *nods* I'm liking the subtle and not so subtle differences. Including Jack getting enjoyment out of making Daniel call him 'Master'. More would definitely be a very good thing.

[identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, I love my sub!Jack too much for you to play too much in this universe... if you do ever do that crossover of our universe into theirs tho... *g* That I will be very happy for!
Though if AU!Daniel ever turned the tables on AU!Jack... wouldn't mind that one either ;-)

I don't even know how people come up with titles! I normally have to get people to come up with them for me! I'm useless like that.

[identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, whatever you write, I'm sure I will lap up as it's my best source of the type of fics I love love anyway!

[identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Um...wow!!! I like this little AU thing ya got going here!!

[identity profile] wraith816.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
First: GUH.

Second: *begs for the crossover*

[identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL at your icon!!

As soon as I read it, I immediately thought of that icon!! LOL!

[identity profile] wraith816.livejournal.com 2006-02-27 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
So we're back to the "I'm Sid's bitch" thing again?

[identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com 2006-02-28 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! Ut oh...there's going to be a rush to kiss Danny's owies! :o) *delph reads again humming 'you always hurt the one you love' to herself*

[identity profile] trika.livejournal.com 2006-02-28 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG Sid! You..I mean..they..um...*GUH*

Master.