A Double Drabble
Feb. 27th, 2006 03:58 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Another trip through the quantum mirror.....
J/D, BDSM, NC-17
ALTERNATE ALTERNATIVE LIFESTYLE
Daniel squatted on the table, hands behind his head and legs wide apart. His dark red cock rose rigidly upwards from the ring that encircled its base. The attached ball-stretcher pulled his testicles down, away from his body. The clamps on his chest were hung with weights, making his nipples obscenely long. His face was flushed, his breathing erratic.
Jack reached out, stroking his cock tauntingly with one finger. Daniel groaned into his gag and swayed. Jack seized his chin and looked Daniel in the eye.
Daniel always gave his body willingly to Jack; he enjoyed being his lover’s plaything. But Daniel’s nature was not in the least submissive. There was always a spark in his eye that, perhaps unwittingly, was a direct challenge to Jack. Sometimes, just sometimes, Jack accepted that challenge.
“Hands and knees.” Jack watched as Daniel silently obeyed him. The change in position shifted the weights that dangled from his nipples, and Daniel widened his eyes, moaning as the sore tissue was stretched anew. Jack flicked at one of the weights, making it dance. Daniel winced. Jack smiled.
It always thrilled him right down to his toenails, when he managed to make Daniel say it.
Master.
J/D, BDSM, NC-17
ALTERNATE ALTERNATIVE LIFESTYLE
Daniel squatted on the table, hands behind his head and legs wide apart. His dark red cock rose rigidly upwards from the ring that encircled its base. The attached ball-stretcher pulled his testicles down, away from his body. The clamps on his chest were hung with weights, making his nipples obscenely long. His face was flushed, his breathing erratic.
Jack reached out, stroking his cock tauntingly with one finger. Daniel groaned into his gag and swayed. Jack seized his chin and looked Daniel in the eye.
Daniel always gave his body willingly to Jack; he enjoyed being his lover’s plaything. But Daniel’s nature was not in the least submissive. There was always a spark in his eye that, perhaps unwittingly, was a direct challenge to Jack. Sometimes, just sometimes, Jack accepted that challenge.
“Hands and knees.” Jack watched as Daniel silently obeyed him. The change in position shifted the weights that dangled from his nipples, and Daniel widened his eyes, moaning as the sore tissue was stretched anew. Jack flicked at one of the weights, making it dance. Daniel winced. Jack smiled.
It always thrilled him right down to his toenails, when he managed to make Daniel say it.
Master.
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 09:40 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 05:26 pm (UTC)Just... GUH!
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 05:32 pm (UTC)I'm trying to make the AU couple different from my original D/j in more than just the obvious way. It's kinda fun. ;-) heh-heh
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 08:43 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 08:16 pm (UTC)Currently. You never know!
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 07:59 pm (UTC)Daniel doesn't come across half as subby (that even a word? LOL!) as our Jack.
I guess that means you're gonna be playing with this alternate universe then? Gonna be writing a longer piece? Coz this is like evilly teasing us with such short snippets!
Oh, and I love the title of this ficlet! *g*
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 08:25 pm (UTC)Yes, I'm playing. There probably won't be any long pieces with just this pairing. Unless I change my mind. ;-) I kinda like being evil, though.
Damn!! I am going to run out of clever names for AU fics! :-(
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 09:37 pm (UTC)Though if AU!Daniel ever turned the tables on AU!Jack... wouldn't mind that one either ;-)
I don't even know how people come up with titles! I normally have to get people to come up with them for me! I'm useless like that.
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 10:37 pm (UTC)lap up as it's my best source of the type of fics I lovelove anyway!(no subject)
Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 10:41 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 10:57 pm (UTC)Thanks, Flute! The AU is a nice place to visit, but...
;-)
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 10:59 pm (UTC)As soon as I read it, I immediately thought of that icon!! LOL!
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Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 11:01 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Feb. 27th, 2006 10:56 pm (UTC)Second: *begs for the crossover*
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Date: Feb. 28th, 2006 01:29 am (UTC):-P
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Date: Feb. 28th, 2006 05:57 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Feb. 28th, 2006 06:48 pm (UTC)Master.
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Date: Feb. 28th, 2006 07:30 pm (UTC)