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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2006-06-27 04:21 pm
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"Fantasy", SG-1 Drabble, rated R

Just a drabble.

Warnings:  Masturbation

(that's actually more of an enticement, if I know you all as well as I think I do)

;-)

FANTASY 

If I close my eyes, it’s his hand touching me, not my own.

I know what it’s like to be held in his arms. I’ve felt their strength; I know his scent.

I’ve seen him naked, in the showers. I don’t stare, but I see. I picture him now, and my hips surge off the bed.

His brown eyes are looking into mine. I’ve seen them look at me in admiration, in anger. Laughing. Concerned. I’ve seen warmth there that makes my spine melt.

I moan. My hand moves faster.

Warmth, but never passion.

Guess he saves that for Daniel.

[identity profile] execknowitall.livejournal.com 2006-06-27 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! That last line just about killed me.

Very nice Sid! *nods*

[identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com 2006-06-27 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, lovely kick at the end there! Very nice.

[identity profile] bugchicklv.livejournal.com 2006-06-27 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
:::LOVES:::

And the best part is, I can't tell who it is supposed to be that is imagining Jack like that! Of course, it could be Teal'c...or Paul.

But I am going with Mitchell.

Yeah. That.

GUH.

[identity profile] slash-whore27.livejournal.com 2006-06-27 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
At first I was guessing Daniel, but the last line spoiled that (I totally have a thing for unrequited Jack/Daniel love). Then I thought of Teal'c or Cameron. Teal'c has this whole brother in arms thing while I can see Cameron having a huge boy crush on Jack.

And wow. I just put too much thought into this. What I'm trying to say is awesome drabble. I love your stuff. :)
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[personal profile] ivorygates 2006-06-28 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
*Whoa*

(hot-hot-hot)

Oh, I know who I think it is...

(and I'm not telling!)

Heeee.....

[identity profile] gaidheil1974.livejournal.com 2006-06-28 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm. It's obvious to me who it is. But very nice subterfuge, nonetheless.

[identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com 2006-06-28 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
That last line kicked me in the gut. Yummy.

And OMFG it's Sam! *dies*

This is the only way I ship Jack/Sam

[identity profile] ms-3m.livejournal.com 2006-06-28 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
OMG *hand over mouth*

When I first read this, I was trying to plug in various names - male gender of course. :P

And then I read the comment/s about Sam....quickly re-read the drabble with Sam in mind and it all clicked very neatly into place.

Well Done!

[identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com 2006-06-28 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
That is wickedly good.

[identity profile] amnellwyvern.livejournal.com 2006-06-28 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggle* Luv the last line! *G*

[identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com 2006-07-01 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
i liked this very much; and for the record, i knew immediately when i got to the last line that it was sam! it just sounds like sam! and in the early seasons, yes the shower emergencies WERE canon.

go you.