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Just a drabble.

Warnings:  Masturbation

(that's actually more of an enticement, if I know you all as well as I think I do)

;-)

FANTASY 

If I close my eyes, it’s his hand touching me, not my own.

I know what it’s like to be held in his arms. I’ve felt their strength; I know his scent.

I’ve seen him naked, in the showers. I don’t stare, but I see. I picture him now, and my hips surge off the bed.

His brown eyes are looking into mine. I’ve seen them look at me in admiration, in anger. Laughing. Concerned. I’ve seen warmth there that makes my spine melt.

I moan. My hand moves faster.

Warmth, but never passion.

Guess he saves that for Daniel.

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Date: Jun. 27th, 2006 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] execknowitall.livejournal.com
OMG! That last line just about killed me.

Very nice Sid! *nods*

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Date: Jun. 27th, 2006 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com
Ooh, lovely kick at the end there! Very nice.

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Date: Jun. 27th, 2006 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bugchicklv.livejournal.com
:::LOVES:::

And the best part is, I can't tell who it is supposed to be that is imagining Jack like that! Of course, it could be Teal'c...or Paul.

But I am going with Mitchell.

Yeah. That.

GUH.

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Date: Jun. 27th, 2006 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bugchicklv.livejournal.com
although using the name "Daniel" seems to rule out both Teal'c and Mitchell.

I dunno, now. Mitchell had that whole SG-1 fanboy thing going on...

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
I was thinking it was Sam - except for that seeing him in the shower thing.

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Date: Jun. 29th, 2006 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
Nah, your good.

It opens up more possibilities. I was trying to think of other guys who had interacted with Jack and then I thought it could be almost anyone. A secret admirer even.

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Date: Jun. 27th, 2006 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slash-whore27.livejournal.com
At first I was guessing Daniel, but the last line spoiled that (I totally have a thing for unrequited Jack/Daniel love). Then I thought of Teal'c or Cameron. Teal'c has this whole brother in arms thing while I can see Cameron having a huge boy crush on Jack.

And wow. I just put too much thought into this. What I'm trying to say is awesome drabble. I love your stuff. :)

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 12:00 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ivorygates
*Whoa*

(hot-hot-hot)

Oh, I know who I think it is...

(and I'm not telling!)

Heeee.....

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 01:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ivorygates
*SNICKER*

There was no doubt in my mind that it was Sam, because you know, fun's fun, and separate showers are All Very Well, but we know (in 'Broca Divide' just for example) that they've been in the same shower room together (because the SGC didn't get separate shower rooms for several months to a year after the project was up and running, and there are times when there are Shower Emergencies.) So I'm pretty sure that Sam has seen Jack naked in the shower, because (*deep sigh*) he sees her as Just One Of The Guys. At least in this universe. *g*

Can't be Mitchell, because Jack wouldn't be around.

Can't be Teal'c, because he wouldn't call 'Daniel', 'Daniel' and the voice is much too informal.

Gotta be Sam.

Poor Sam....

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Date: Jul. 2nd, 2006 01:56 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ivorygates
I'm undecided in so many ways. I love True Romance, and I know what pairing TPTB want us to believe in, but I can't see Jack (or Sam) being an idiot and pursuing it. And I love Teh Slash *g*, and I dunno (maybe it's the heat) but it always seems as if J/D is more logically presented in fic even if it's more RW unlikely. Is it because we see more on-screen chemistry there? *puzzles*

I do love the boys and how you write them, so yeah: your Sam definitely knows it's a fantasy! Which is cool....

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Date: Jul. 2nd, 2006 03:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ivorygates
OMG, can you see Daniel trying to explain astrophysics to Jack??? Given that Daniel doesn't understand astrophysics in the first place?

*snicker*

I would pay money to see that.

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Date: Jul. 2nd, 2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ivorygates
ohyeahbutibet he'd pay a lot more attention if Danny was the one explaining things...

*VBEG*

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaidheil1974.livejournal.com
Hmm. It's obvious to me who it is. But very nice subterfuge, nonetheless.

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
That last line kicked me in the gut. Yummy.

And OMFG it's Sam! *dies*

This is the only way I ship Jack/Sam

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucifrix.livejournal.com
See now, I didn't think of Sam because of the line about the showers. I took from that that seeing him in the showers was routine, whereas I would assume it would only be occasional, and under unusual circumstances.

And dammit, Sid, I'm all for the pissing and any other kinky shit you can throw at us, but THIS is just crossing the line. Making me think of a vagina in the middle of a J/D mental moment--for shame! ;)

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com
LOL!!! And ditto. ;-)

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
Jack/Sam where Jack is on the other side of town making love to Daniel? heehee!

Nah, Sam deserves better. Jack/Sam when it's actually a cover for Jack/Daniel and Sam/Janet. Now that's the way I like it.

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ms-3m.livejournal.com
OMG *hand over mouth*

When I first read this, I was trying to plug in various names - male gender of course. :P

And then I read the comment/s about Sam....quickly re-read the drabble with Sam in mind and it all clicked very neatly into place.

Well Done!

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
That is wickedly good.

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Date: Jun. 28th, 2006 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amnellwyvern.livejournal.com
*giggle* Luv the last line! *G*

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Date: Jul. 1st, 2006 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com
i liked this very much; and for the record, i knew immediately when i got to the last line that it was sam! it just sounds like sam! and in the early seasons, yes the shower emergencies WERE canon.

go you.

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