"Fantasy", SG-1 Drabble, rated R

[sid]

Just a drabble.

Warnings:  Masturbation

(that's actually more of an enticement, if I know you all as well as I think I do)

;-)

FANTASY 

If I close my eyes, it’s his hand touching me, not my own.

I know what it’s like to be held in his arms. I’ve felt their strength; I know his scent.

I’ve seen him naked, in the showers. I don’t stare, but I see. I picture him now, and my hips surge off the bed.

His brown eyes are looking into mine. I’ve seen them look at me in admiration, in anger. Laughing. Concerned. I’ve seen warmth there that makes my spine melt.

I moan. My hand moves faster.

Warmth, but never passion.

Guess he saves that for Daniel.

Comments

[execknowitall.livejournal.com]

OMG! That last line just about killed me.

Very nice Sid! *nods*

[sid]

Thanks sweetie! :-)

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

Ooh, lovely kick at the end there! Very nice.

[sid]

Thanks! I was going for the kick! ;-)

[bugchicklv.livejournal.com]

:::LOVES:::

And the best part is, I can't tell who it is supposed to be that is imagining Jack like that! Of course, it could be Teal'c...or Paul.

But I am going with Mitchell.

Yeah. That.

GUH.

[sid]

Well, I guess it's up to the individual reader! although using the name "Daniel" seems to rule out both Teal'c and Mitchell.

I'll admit to utilizing a bit of fanon for this one...

[bugchicklv.livejournal.com]

although using the name "Daniel" seems to rule out both Teal'c and Mitchell.

I dunno, now. Mitchell had that whole SG-1 fanboy thing going on...

[sid]

But Mitchell calls him "Jackson".

And Teal'c, "DanielJackson".

That's all I meant.

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

I was thinking it was Sam - except for that seeing him in the shower thing.

[sid]

It's never happened on the show, of course, but in fanfic...

I guess sometimes canon and fanon don't mix very well. It's all canon!Sam except for that line. My bad.

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

Nah, your good.

It opens up more possibilities. I was trying to think of other guys who had interacted with Jack and then I thought it could be almost anyone. A secret admirer even.

[sid]

Of which I am certain that he has many.

Many, many, many.

*wipes away drool*

[slash-whore27.livejournal.com]

At first I was guessing Daniel, but the last line spoiled that (I totally have a thing for unrequited Jack/Daniel love). Then I thought of Teal'c or Cameron. Teal'c has this whole brother in arms thing while I can see Cameron having a huge boy crush on Jack.

And wow. I just put too much thought into this. What I'm trying to say is awesome drabble. I love your stuff. :)

[sid]

I'm glad you like it so much! But I'm starting to think that I must have cheated. I combined canon with fanon, and it's throwing people off.

meep!

[ivorygates]

*Whoa*

(hot-hot-hot)

Oh, I know who I think it is...

(and I'm not telling!)

Heeee.....

[sid]

Me too! Oh, wait....

[ivorygates]

*SNICKER*

There was no doubt in my mind that it was Sam, because you know, fun's fun, and separate showers are All Very Well, but we know (in 'Broca Divide' just for example) that they've been in the same shower room together (because the SGC didn't get separate shower rooms for several months to a year after the project was up and running, and there are times when there are Shower Emergencies.) So I'm pretty sure that Sam has seen Jack naked in the shower, because (*deep sigh*) he sees her as Just One Of The Guys. At least in this universe. *g*

Can't be Mitchell, because Jack wouldn't be around.

Can't be Teal'c, because he wouldn't call 'Daniel', 'Daniel' and the voice is much too informal.

Gotta be Sam.

Poor Sam....

[sid]

And because of the whole being-held-in-his-arms bit. Although Teal'c would fit that. But, yeah, the voice doesn't fit Teal'c.

At least Sam knows it's a fantasy. TPTB haven't figured it out yet!

[ivorygates]

I'm undecided in so many ways. I love True Romance, and I know what pairing TPTB want us to believe in, but I can't see Jack (or Sam) being an idiot and pursuing it. And I love Teh Slash *g*, and I dunno (maybe it's the heat) but it always seems as if J/D is more logically presented in fic even if it's more RW unlikely. Is it because we see more on-screen chemistry there? *puzzles*

I do love the boys and how you write them, so yeah: your Sam definitely knows it's a fantasy! Which is cool....

[sid]

Oh, I have no problem with het and True Romance, and all that. But I don't see it with Sam and Jack. At ALL.

Jack and Daniel share a lot of agonizing moments on-screen, and fun moments, too. The banter, the touching. Chemistry. Biology. Everything but astrophysics. ;-)

[ivorygates]

OMG, can you see Daniel trying to explain astrophysics to Jack??? Given that Daniel doesn't understand astrophysics in the first place?

*snicker*

I would pay money to see that.

[sid]

Well, we've all seen the look on Jack's face when Sam tries to explain it!

LOL!

[ivorygates]

ohyeahbutibet he'd pay a lot more attention if Danny was the one explaining things...

*VBEG*

[gaidheil1974.livejournal.com]

Hmm. It's obvious to me who it is. But very nice subterfuge, nonetheless.

[sid]

The subterfuge was meant to end at the last line, but I guess I was sneakier than I thought! :-)

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

That last line kicked me in the gut. Yummy.

And OMFG it's Sam! *dies*

This is the only way I ship Jack/Sam

[sid]

Bingo!

Or, at least, that's who I thought it was - maybe I was wrong?

Jack/Sam where Jack is on the other side of town making love to Daniel? heehee!

[lucifrix.livejournal.com]

See now, I didn't think of Sam because of the line about the showers. I took from that that seeing him in the showers was routine, whereas I would assume it would only be occasional, and under unusual circumstances.

And dammit, Sid, I'm all for the pissing and any other kinky shit you can throw at us, but THIS is just crossing the line. Making me think of a vagina in the middle of a J/D mental moment--for shame! ;)

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

LOL!!! And ditto. ;-)

[sid]

When people started guessing various guys' names, I thought about editing the drabble somehow to add the word accidentally, but that wouldn't really work. Occasionally, now that would work! D'oh!

Sorry for the v-word image. Mea culpa!

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Jack/Sam where Jack is on the other side of town making love to Daniel? heehee!

Nah, Sam deserves better. Jack/Sam when it's actually a cover for Jack/Daniel and Sam/Janet. Now that's the way I like it.

[sid]

Okay, I can get behind that. :-D

I mean, femslash isn't my thing, but they make a cute couple!

[ms-3m.livejournal.com]

OMG *hand over mouth*

When I first read this, I was trying to plug in various names - male gender of course. :P

And then I read the comment/s about Sam....quickly re-read the drabble with Sam in mind and it all clicked very neatly into place.

Well Done!

[sid]

Thank you! It was so clearly Sam, in my scary little mind, that I thought the last line was a dead giveaway. I guess a person would have had to read all the same fanfics I have, with the whole team hitting the showers together when necessary. :-)

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

That is wickedly good.

[sid]

Thank you! Wicked, huh? *preens*

[amnellwyvern.livejournal.com]

*giggle* Luv the last line! *G*

[sid]

OTP baby! :-D

[princessofg.livejournal.com]

i liked this very much; and for the record, i knew immediately when i got to the last line that it was sam! it just sounds like sam! and in the early seasons, yes the shower emergencies WERE canon.

go you.

[sid]

Thanks! Sam is entitled to her masturbatory fantasies, as long as she knows it's only a fantasy, right?

:-)