'The Nose Knows', Jim/Blair, PG-13 (Five senses, five days)

[sid]

The final ficlet from My Mongoose e-zine.  Let's see, this week we've covered hearing, taste, touch and now smell.  Tomorrow = sight.  Now all I have to do is write it.  *g*

Post-First Time afterglow, ~260 PG-13 rated words, with thanks again to janedavitt  for her beta-work and Peter for the artwork. 

 

THE NOSE KNOWS

“I always knew we’d wind up like this.”  Blair sighed happily.

 

“Always?” Jim said skeptically. “I think that’s a slight exaggeration, Chief.”

 

“No, seriously, man! From the minute we met! You didn’t feel anything?” Blair looked a little hurt.

 

“The minute we met? No. And neither did you.” Jim gave him a knowing look.

 

“Well,” Blair admitted, “I guess maybe it was the second time we met.” He grinned slowly. “Probably about the time you slammed me up against the wall of my office…”

 

Jim rolled over and pressed Blair down into the pillows. “You smelled so good,” he growled, eyes glittering.   

 

Nervousness, a little fear, excitement. Growing arousal, Blair remembered. No wonder Jim was so certain that it had been their second meeting that had led to this moment of post-coital bliss. “How do I smell now?” he asked, feeling his heartbeat beginning to accelerate.

 

Jim’s head lowered as he buried his nose against the damp skin of Blair’s neck and inhaled deeply. Blair felt a shiver run through Jim’s body. “You smell like me,” Jim said hoarsely. His eyes met Blair’s. “You smell like me.”

 

Blair nodded fervently and pulled Jim to him, crushing their lips together. When they broke for air he put his mouth to Jim’s ear and told him with hot whispered words just how much he’d loved hearing that, and just what it was doing to him, knowing that his skin was saturated with Jim’s scent.

 

When they kissed again, Jim began to moan.

 

It was a long time later before he stopped.

Comments

[elven-wolf.livejournal.com]

Sexy. Love it.

[sid]

Yay for sexy! Thank you.

[betagoddess.livejournal.com]

Ooo! Very nice! *g*

Thanks!

[sid]

Glad you liked it! :-)

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

Guh. You write these two so well :;happy shiver::

[sid]

Um, I learned from the best? *g*

One more to write. :-)

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

:;blushes:: Thank you!

[quyllur.livejournal.com]

Hmmmmm. Skin saturated with Jim's scent. Oh, yeah. And the hoarse way Jim said "You smell Like me." Oh, you wrote this SO well!

[sid]

Oh, thank you, I'm glad you think so!

:-)

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

“You smell like me,” Jim said hoarsely. His eyes met Blair’s. “You smell like me.”

NNNnnnnggghh!! *fans self* *combusts anyway*

[sid]

My work here is done...

:-D

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

*rises from ashes to point finger* You Porn Assassin, you!

[sid]

*nods agreeably* Whatever. ;-)

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

Whew! Hot.

[sid]

Glad you liked it! They're just dripping with teh hawt. :-)

[fluterbev.livejournal.com]

Oh, very hot and sexy! Gorgeous writing :-)

[sid]

:-) Thank you very much! Glad it hit the spot for you.

I'm just about done with the final story in my Five Days, Five Senses scheme, so that'll be posted before too long. \o/

[snycock.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm...loved the idea of Blair saturated with Jim's scent and that turning both of them on...what a lovely surprise on a gloomy Friday...

[sid]

Saturday's pretty gloomy, too, but lovely feedback helps. :-)

[captainlogic.livejournal.com]

Hummmnnnnaaaaaaa. <-----thats a good thing. A very good thing!

[sid]

Yay!! :-)

[begonia125rose.livejournal.com]

Very nice. Just what I needed this afternoon.

[sid]

That is always terrific to hear. I'm so glad!