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The final ficlet from My Mongoose e-zine.  Let's see, this week we've covered hearing, taste, touch and now smell.  Tomorrow = sight.  Now all I have to do is write it.  *g*

Post-First Time afterglow, ~260 PG-13 rated words, with thanks again to [personal profile] janedavitt  for her beta-work and Peter for the artwork. 

 

THE NOSE KNOWS

“I always knew we’d wind up like this.”  Blair sighed happily.
 
“Always?” Jim said skeptically. “I think that’s a slight exaggeration, Chief.”
 
“No, seriously, man! From the minute we met! You didn’t feel anything?” Blair looked a little hurt.
 
“The minute we met? No. And neither did you.” Jim gave him a knowing look.
 
“Well,” Blair admitted, “I guess maybe it was the second time we met.” He grinned slowly. “Probably about the time you slammed me up against the wall of my office…”
 
Jim rolled over and pressed Blair down into the pillows. “You smelled so good,” he growled, eyes glittering.   
 
Nervousness, a little fear, excitement. Growing arousal, Blair remembered. No wonder Jim was so certain that it had been their second meeting that had led to this moment of post-coital bliss. “How do I smell now?” he asked, feeling his heartbeat beginning to accelerate.
 
Jim’s head lowered as he buried his nose against the damp skin of Blair’s neck and inhaled deeply. Blair felt a shiver run through Jim’s body. “You smell like me,” Jim said hoarsely. His eyes met Blair’s. “You smell like me.”
 
Blair nodded fervently and pulled Jim to him, crushing their lips together. When they broke for air he put his mouth to Jim’s ear and told him with hot whispered words just how much he’d loved hearing that, and just what it was doing to him, knowing that his skin was saturated with Jim’s scent.
 
When they kissed again, Jim began to moan.
 
It was a long time later before he stopped.

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elven-wolf.livejournal.com
Sexy. Love it.

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] betagoddess.livejournal.com
Ooo! Very nice! *g*

Thanks!

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com
Guh. You write these two so well :;happy shiver::

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com
:;blushes:: Thank you!

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quyllur.livejournal.com
Hmmmmm. Skin saturated with Jim's scent. Oh, yeah. And the hoarse way Jim said "You smell Like me." Oh, you wrote this SO well!

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com
“You smell like me,” Jim said hoarsely. His eyes met Blair’s. “You smell like me.”

NNNnnnnggghh!! *fans self* *combusts anyway*

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com
*rises from ashes to point finger* You Porn Assassin, you!

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
Whew! Hot.

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Date: Oct. 26th, 2007 07:09 pm (UTC)
ext_14365: If you made this, tell me and I'll credit (TS: Hot!)
From: [identity profile] fluterbev.livejournal.com
Oh, very hot and sexy! Gorgeous writing :-)

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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snycock.livejournal.com
Mmmmm...loved the idea of Blair saturated with Jim's scent and that turning both of them on...what a lovely surprise on a gloomy Friday...

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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 10:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captainlogic.livejournal.com
Hummmnnnnaaaaaaa. <-----thats a good thing. A very good thing!

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Date: Nov. 2nd, 2007 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] begonia125rose.livejournal.com
Very nice. Just what I needed this afternoon.

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