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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2007-11-06 11:44 pm
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Fic meme responses

This was the meme:   Name any story I've written, and any character in it, canon or OC. I'll tell you three things about that character which I didn't put in the story. 

Dom!Daniel from any story for [personal profile] tejas
 
1. Daniel had never lacked confidence in his abilities as a dom. But getting it right with Jack was the most important thing he’d ever undertaken. And not just because of their friendship, although that meant that he cared much more about Jack’s happiness and well-being than he’d ever cared about any previous partner. It was because of Jack’s job and position in the grand scheme of things. Earth needed Jack O’Neill at his best. Earth couldn’t afford for Daniel to fuck up. No pressure.
 
2. Jack in heavy bondage, struggling, was a beautiful sight. Jack, unbound, unmoving at Daniel’s order, was incredibly beautiful. Jack, groaning around a gag, truly beautiful. Jack, ungagged, straining to remain silent at Daniel’s order, heart-stoppingly beautiful. Jack, naked at Daniel’s feet, leaning against his leg, quiet and content…the most beautiful sight ever. It was ultimately that simple act of graceful submission that stole Daniel’s heart.
 
3. They haven’t experimented yet. Jack’s not ready. But Daniel’s convinced he soon will be. And ever since they compared notes with their alternate reality counterparts, Daniel’s had a growing desire to lie across Jack’s lap and be held in place with one strong arm while a broad, callused hand applies heat to his squirming ass….
 
 
"This Changes Everything" - 3 things about Samantha Carter you did not put in the story for [personal profile] zats_clear.

1. When they were told that they had to have sex in order to be released, Sam wasn’t completely surprised. She’d been anticipating trouble of a sexual nature ever since the four of them had found themselves naked in a cell together. But it was a shock when she realized exactly what the aliens had in mind. Still, she’d rather it were all three of her teammates than any single one of those sons of bitches out there looking on and gloating.
 
2. It was totally inappropriate to the situation, but as Daniel was on top of her, being as gentle as humanly possible, Sam couldn’t help weeping hot, angry, bitter tears over the loss and utter destruction of her most cherished masturbatory fantasies.
 
3. When Daniel made his proposal to take her place, Sam nearly blacked out for a few seconds. Even the possibility of a reprieve was so overwhelming…and when the aliens agreed, when she begged Daniel not to do it, she was shaking with relief, because she knew it was as good as settled. But that didn’t mean that her plea wasn’t sincere.
 
 
"Idyll"- Daniel for [personal profile] charmedstrange1
 
1. Sometimes Daniel cursed Jack for making him into a heartless bastard who’d take advantage of a teammate, a friend. Other times Daniel thought that he wasn’t really taking advantage of Mitchell, that Mitchell was a big boy who’d be long gone if he’d happened to feel that way about it. And sometimes Daniel realized that Jack hadn’t made him into anything, that Jack couldn’t be held responsible for what unrequited love turned Daniel into. A love that Jack didn’t even know existed (although in his weakest moments Daniel thought that he did know, and had left town at least partly because of it).
 
2. Cute was the only word for Mitchell when he broached the subject of not using condoms anymore. Cute, anxious, a little tentative. Daniel didn’t like thinking about him in terms like that, because he always felt that it was a bit condescending of him. He wanted (needed) to keep a distance between them, but it had to be a horizontal distance, not a vertical one where he was looking down from some superior position. Anyway, he was perfectly fine with losing the condoms, but he would never have brought it up. He would never do anything that might act to tie Mitchell to him. But as long as it was Mitchell’s idea…Daniel hadn’t expected to be kissed for agreeing (and he’d hungered for Jack’s thin lips for too many years to settle for any others).
 
3. It hadn’t taken long for Daniel to stop closing his eyes and imagining that it was Jack in his bed. Partly because he couldn’t fool himself. Mitchell smelled like Mitchell, his skin felt like Mitchell’s, his cock didn’t have that sweet curve that Jack’s had. And partly because Daniel was enjoying himself more than he’d expected and looking at Mitchell turned out to give him a lot of pleasure, and the sounds that Mitchell made that didn’t sound in the least like Jack were still music to Daniel’s ears. (And the look and smell and feel and sound of Jack in the throes of lovemaking was still available to Daniel in his fantasies, and if sometimes Cam’s smile intruded, well, that was only natural and if it happened more frequently as time went on, well, that was only natural, too.)


[identity profile] charmedstrange1.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 06:05 am (UTC)(link)
*Love!* Oh, I love this! This is so perfect and makes perfect sense. Oh, Daniel. 1 and 2 are so hurty and make so much 'Daniel' sense- I can see him thinking like this and it comes through in the story- even from Cam's POV.

(And #1, Oh Daniel, Jack didn't know. We know he didn't know, but I can so see Daniel imagining (sometimes) that he did.)

But three! Three! Mitchell and reality encroaching on Daniel's closed-off-ness,- "Mitchell smelled like Mitchell,"-- so GUH! and so sweet and so sad all at the same time. Just like the original story. *g*

THANK you for this peek into Daniel. Just lovely.

[identity profile] charmedstrange1.livejournal.com 2007-11-08 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, didn't mean to scare you. *g* But you were up to the challenge! This was just the sort of thing I wanted to know, so Yay!

[identity profile] charmedstrange1.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 06:15 am (UTC)(link)
Also- in the one for [livejournal.com profile] tejas- yes to "The Earth needed Jack O'Neill at his best.. no pressure" hee poor Daniel; and there is So Much Guh in #2, and #3 too, for that matter.

And in the Sam entry, #2 is so hurty and makes me sad for Sam but I can so relate and who the hell could blame her and it's kinda hot to think about her fantasizing about him I can't help it.

[identity profile] starting-gate.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Change of Heart? Is that you? I like your new lj decor, but why the grumpy? :(

*big squishy hug*

I miss D/s J/D! It's so nice to see them again.

Earth couldn’t afford for Daniel to fuck up. No pressure

Whoa. That's one impressive thought. Well done!

*one more, bigger, squishier hug*

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[identity profile] zats-clear.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I knew it would be worth it to look into Sam's mind in that story! #2 makes me hurt for Sam. #3 rings so true. And the juxtaposition of 1, 2, and 3 with the emotional flow from each in a finite space of time is very natural. She goes from Defiance to Grief to Relief. An SG-1 abbreviated version of the 7 stages of grief (http://www.proactivechange.com/psychotherapy/grief/stages.htm) perhaps?
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[identity profile] zats-clear.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
::ahem::

see, I don't just read for the porn!
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[personal profile] paian 2007-11-07 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
These are great. :-)
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[personal profile] paian 2007-11-07 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
'Matinee' Daniel as I read him felt colder and more dangerous than the 'As You Were' Daniel in my head, but that's an unexamined gut response, since I don't actually know much about 'As You Were' Daniel. He's a Schrodinger's Daniel, all things and none until/unless I open his box in an 'As You Were' sequel. I still have a strong sense of a 'Matinee' Daniel who'd had a relationship with Jack -- one that crashed and burned and broke him very deeply and left him a nearly impossible nut to crack emotionally. But that's not 'Idyll' Daniel (who's totally your baby and I don't think I could have added anything to for this meme, tho you were sweet to think of me :-)). That's yet a third angle on O'Neill/Jackson/Mitchell (and one I hope somebody writes, 'cause it could be way cool -- either the owchiest version yet, or a beautiful comfort fic, if Mitchell could melt those pain-barriers). I do love me some iterations. *g*
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[personal profile] paian 2007-11-16 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Such a good question, about whether you could recapture your original perspective on the first fic, or if you've remixed your own interpretation! Hee. I'll be really interested to hear what happens if you give it a re-read.

In 'As You Were' all we really know about Daniel is that Daniel does love/want Jack and didn't know Jack loved/wanted him. Where Daniel's really coming from could be almost anywhere, and the question of what sort of relationship he had (or believed he was having, or not having) with Mitchell isn't answered, so anybody who wanted to take the story from there could collapse the wave function into whatever made sense to them or made for an interesting fic. (I'd leave Daniel smelling like Mitchell, you'd have him showered by the time Jack came back in ... two different Daniels right there! *g*) They could build on the combination of 'Matinee'/'Idyll'/'As You Were,' with the Daniel who was warmed and gentled by his developing relationship with Cam, or fill in the 'As You Were' blanks completely differently. That's what I mean by Schrodinger's. Basically, 'lots of room for interpretation.' *g*

Which probably means that I'll never write a sequel to 'As You Were,' or if I did it would be a set of sequels looking at all the different ways it might go from there, because the way I see that fic (independent of the series you made), the open ending really is the ending: the door opens, and it's left to the reader to walk through it with Jack and decide what happens. I think my personal interpretation is actually the uncollapsed version, weird as that may sound. In my head I've got a Daniel who stills smells of sex with Mitchell falling into an exhausted embrace with a Jack who's determined to be the man he used to be again ... just the two of them hanging there on each other, not speaking ... and after that, infinite possibilities. But it would be beautiful if you could write a series ending that brought all three of them to a happier place. And somebody should definitely jump on that OT3 thing. *g*
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[personal profile] paian 2007-11-16 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
It would make a cool fic tree!

And yeah, I'd definitely wipe up, and I'm sure Daniel did that much. :-)