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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote2008-03-25 03:48 pm
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'On Call', gen drabble

This strange little thing just came out of the blue last night, when I was musing about prompts: 

ON CALL
 
Jack stayed at Daniel’s bedside into the wee hours, seeking encouragement from the steady heart rhythm on the monitor. But Daniel’s face was a mass of bruises on shockingly pale skin, and there was universal concern that he hadn’t woken yet. So Jack sat and worried.
 
A hand touched his shoulder, and Jack knew he’d fallen asleep. Janet was peering at the monitors. Her hand smoothed over Daniel’s sheets. She turned, smiling. “He’s going to be fine, Colonel.”
 
“It’s General, now, actually.” 

Jack opened his eyes, feeling refreshed and filled with renewed hope. His faith in Janet had never died.

[identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
It took me a minute to figure that out, but when I did, I totally melted. I love the idea of Janet looking over them even after she's gone. :D
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[identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 08:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Cuz, damnit, somebody's got to. :-)

Very nice, Sid!
ext_3999: (Jack Daniel Balcony)

[identity profile] discodiva76.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god...you're really on fire tonight aren't you?.....simply lovely yet again.....*sniffs*....


I'm having such wonderful visuals from these drabbles.....


Deeds xx

[identity profile] maab-connor.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
i think you just broke my heart a little.

[identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Too sweet! Wahhhaaa! I miss Janet! I miss Jack and Daniel! I miss SG1!

[identity profile] secondalto.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yay for Janet, always looking after her patients!
kazbaby: (comfort me)

[personal profile] kazbaby 2008-03-25 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*whimper*

Very lovely. I like the idea of her continuing to watch over them.

[identity profile] sg1danny.livejournal.com 2008-03-25 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww...I miss Janet sooooooo much!!!

[identity profile] magnavox-23.livejournal.com 2008-03-26 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, *sniffle* :'(
ext_28871: (SG-1 Janet)

[identity profile] tigerlilly2063.livejournal.com 2008-03-26 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
What a nice thought that Janet is still out there watching over them.

Lovely. :)

[identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com 2008-03-26 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, that just piles on the ouchies.

[identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com 2008-03-26 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, Daniel always looks so pretty when he cries. I look like nothing on Earth. See?
So nice to see Janet is still doing the rounds of her infirmary .... I miss her. :-(
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Sigh

[identity profile] eremc.livejournal.com 2008-03-27 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
I always believed Janet and Jack would be good friends. Friends who shared a great sense of humor and a love a Cassie. It is nice to know she continues to be there for him.
This is heartwarming.
eremc

[identity profile] starting-gate.livejournal.com 2008-03-27 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
You is so clever. Perfect Jack response, too. :)
ext_3557: annerb icon with scenes of all team variations, my OTP (Janet Smiling)

[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com 2008-03-29 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Aw! How lovely! What an awesome not-dream moment.

*Misses Janet*

[identity profile] fhartman.livejournal.com 2008-03-29 12:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. Oh, oh....

This is beautiful, sad, and beautiful. It took me a second, and then - just, yes.
ext_3563: A little reading elf, captioned 'fool for books' (daniel-if you dream)

[identity profile] lokei.livejournal.com 2008-03-29 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw. Hurrah for Janet, still looking after her number-one problem-team. This is brilliant, sweet, and makes me annoyed they killed Janet all over again.

[identity profile] damietta.livejournal.com 2008-03-29 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that was just perfect.

(I miss Janet.)

[identity profile] tresa-cho.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
This deserves daaaawwww on so many levels. Janet *tear*