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A J/D drabble, rated R, spanking.

somewhere through the quantum mirror....



STRIKING IMAGE

Daniel tightened his grip on Jack, eyes gleaming with pleasure as the other man squirmed and panted. He felt Jack’s cock pressing into his thigh. The cheeks of Jack’s ass had been painted a bright, beautiful red by his blows. Could anything be better than this? He raised the paddle.

In another universe, not too far away, the paddle fell, and Daniel jerked and moaned into his gag. He felt his cock stiffen, pressing against the fabric of Jack’s trousers. Another blow, increasing heat, pure painful delight. He couldn’t imagine a world without this. It just doesn’t get any better.

THE END

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com
Oh, cool idea! Love it and the twist.

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 04:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tigerlilly2063.livejournal.com
It would be so interesting for them to meet and compare notes. *hehe*

Niccccccccccccccce.....

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com
Heh, that would be kinda amusing! You could imagine sub!Jack and sub!Daniel being embarrassed while the other two discuss things ;-)

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com
Heh, that might be the better word.
*grins to herself as she imagine it*

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com
Oh cool! No, wait, I mean HOT!!!

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunachickk.livejournal.com
Oooooh, spanking! Nice twist. They should meet sometime. Hehe

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunachickk.livejournal.com
PLOT BUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 05:00 pm (UTC)

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amnellwyvern.livejournal.com
Very nice... *dribble*

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] execknowitall.livejournal.com
Mmmmmmmm... I like the turn around.

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] execknowitall.livejournal.com
*nods* Yes. Very. There'll be more? *poke* *poke* Right? *prods*

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com
Ah, that would explain why I've read some fics with Jack as the dom then! *g*
Very nice drabble.

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trika.livejournal.com
Oh my. It's nice to know that the games and toys are the same in both universes. Yup, they should definitely meet up. *g*

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trika.livejournal.com
*pours bags of carrots around Sid, sits back and waits patiently*

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com
*snorts*
Having seen all the comments here, and then the reviews on the cartouche, it looks like you shouldn't have written this unless you wanted to explore this alternate universe *g*
Unless your mind was trying to tell you something ;-)

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Date: Feb. 21st, 2006 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenellaevangela.livejournal.com
I've read all the stories on our lj, but I don't think I've commented yet! So I would like to say that I really like your fanfic and this drabble was great (nice twist).

I also have to add to the "let's see them meet!" uproar :-)

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Date: Feb. 22nd, 2006 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenellaevangela.livejournal.com
Sorry it took so long to introduce myself!

:-) At least you don't have to worry about running out of ideas!

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Date: Feb. 22nd, 2006 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karendreamer.livejournal.com
Simple, hot, clever. Very nice.

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Date: Feb. 22nd, 2006 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celticmuse5.livejournal.com
Sid! I *adore* your J/D stories. Or should that be D/j? *g*

Glad to see you here, and what a great way to introduce yourself.

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Date: Feb. 23rd, 2006 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celticmuse5.livejournal.com
Looks like I may have to branch out into some J/d as well as D/j.

*looks agast* But, but, what about poor Jack? He needs his Daniel to give him lots of...ahem...attention. Please don't neglect sub!Jack. *g*

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