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OK, here is some:
It's another visit to the AU, where Jack is dom, and Daniel pretends he's a sub. (He's just in it for the sex)
This one is 400 words, so each time I go through the quantum mirror, the story doubles in size. I think if I'm not careful, I may rip the fabric of time and space if I make too many trips. *is alarmed*
NC-17, BDSM, AU, J/D
THE FLIP SIDE
Daniel loved rimming Jack.
They had ritualized it. It was always the same. Jack would order Daniel to rim him and Daniel would object, always careful to stop short of outright refusal. Then Jack would throw Daniel to the floor and hold him down, and use the paddle on him. Short, rapid-fire strokes that would quickly have both of them panting and hard. And the spanking would continue until Daniel was ready to be obedient.
Then Jack would arrange himself face down on the bed and Daniel would begin licking between the cheeks of his ass, dipping the tip of his tongue into Jack’s puckered hole. "Deeper!" Jack would growl, and Daniel would protest that he couldn’t go any deeper in that position.
So Jack would flip over onto his back, and Daniel would push his legs up towards his chest. And Jack would hold his legs, holding himself open for Daniel. Who would put his mouth to Jack’s asshole and drive in deep with his tongue, twisting and pushing. And he would tell Jack to open himself up more, and Jack would do as he was told.
And Daniel would reward his obedience with a tongue fucking that made Jack moan. And plead. Begging Daniel to touch him, to let him come. Jack would writhe on the bed and Daniel would hold him in place with a firm grip that would leave bruises. His own cock would be throbbing with excitement and demanding release.
Finally, Jack would cry out his name in just the right way, with just the right amount of desperation. And Daniel would finally take Jack’s rock-hard prick in his hand and stroke it. Jack’s rectum would clench around Daniel’s sinuous tongue and Jack would gasp loudly, and his hips would lurch. His hot come would shoot into the air, splashing down over his chest and face, some of it dribbling down over Daniel’s clutching hand.
Then Daniel would pull his tongue out of his lover and raise himself up on his knees, and look down on the man he had just conquered. And he would fist his own cock, his heart pounding, his lust overwhelming. He would come, spurting his seed onto Jack’s compliant body, his balls, his limp cock. And Jack would quiver, eyes wide.
And, in those moments, Daniel would experience the thrill of dominating a strong partner.
Yes, Daniel loved rimming Jack.
THE END
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Date: Mar. 7th, 2006 01:37 pm (UTC)*uses appropriate icon...stares*
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Date: Mar. 7th, 2006 02:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Mar. 7th, 2006 10:33 pm (UTC)You did it again. ;)
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Date: Mar. 7th, 2006 10:40 pm (UTC)Thanks!!
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Date: Mar. 7th, 2006 11:39 pm (UTC)*is seriously wondering who's REALLY the Dom here*
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Date: Mar. 8th, 2006 12:32 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Jun. 11th, 2007 12:24 am (UTC)*dies*
Oh, so much love for you right now.
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Date: Jun. 11th, 2007 12:37 am (UTC)