That's Cammie and JD: insults even in the midst of making love!
And yes, your faith is warranted! ...slowly. We're about 250,000 words in, with giant gaps still to be filled in, and ... well, Cammie and Daniel are sleeping together, and Cammie and JD are of course, and JD and Daniel have just started, but they are not yet all three together. But we're getting there! Eventually!
(Yes, this thing is going to be around 500k words when done, probably.)
But yes, you captured the love that the entire Nielson-Mitchell household swims in so beautifully. It's gorgeous. And as for the edit -- it's such a subtle moment that I missed it on the first read, which makes it even more perfect because of course that's how JD rolls, but oh, Lord, what a fucking gorgeous moment of the suppressed yearning JD's been living with for so damn long. *happy sigh*
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Date: Nov. 14th, 2009 07:03 am (UTC)And yes, your faith is warranted! ...slowly. We're about 250,000 words in, with giant gaps still to be filled in, and ... well, Cammie and Daniel are sleeping together, and Cammie and JD are of course, and JD and Daniel have just started, but they are not yet all three together. But we're getting there! Eventually!
(Yes, this thing is going to be around 500k words when done, probably.)
But yes, you captured the love that the entire Nielson-Mitchell household swims in so beautifully. It's gorgeous. And as for the edit -- it's such a subtle moment that I missed it on the first read, which makes it even more perfect because of course that's how JD rolls, but oh, Lord, what a fucking gorgeous moment of the suppressed yearning JD's been living with for so damn long. *happy sigh*