looking for at least three betas

I haz a story. Jack/Daniel. Rated R. ~4000 words.

It's written the way I've always envisioned it, but I'm uncertain how other people will regard it.

So I'd like to get at least one beta for the usual grammar, punctuation type of thing, and a couple other sets of eyes to let me know if it works for them.

I'm off to bed, so don't look for a response from me for eight hours!