I really love the way you can put the guys and the readers through the incredible rollercoaster of 'yikes-uh-oh-ouch-aww-yay!' and have it all feel like a real conversation with believable emotional flow.
And this? let’s not throw the slutty jeans out with the fantasy, okay? That would be wasteful. Good idea, Jack! *snicker*
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2010 01:36 pm (UTC)And this? let’s not throw the slutty jeans out with the fantasy, okay? That would be wasteful. Good idea, Jack! *snicker*