This was a really happy fic to write, and it's great to hear that it was a happy-making read, too. And the lines you pulled out, yay! Especially that last one -- I think it's really lovely when Jack likes being held and is comfortable with it, and here he just naturally slipped right into that position. I'm very pleased that it struck you.
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branchandroot
Re: Fic: Verbatim (teen, 2200 words)
Date: Mar. 10th, 2012 06:30 am (UTC)