Oh, yay, you liked the French fry salute! That really did actually make me laugh out loud when it came out of the keyboard. It's so silly and so ridiculously insubordinate of him, and Jack was making a pretty important point about command authority, but he doesn't need to harp on it -- he knows Daniel heard him, so he just takes the opportunity to steal some food, and moves right along. I'm also really happy to hear that it sounded like them, and that it gave you some laughter. Thank you for telling me!
Re: Fic: Verbatim (teen, 2200 words)
Date: Mar. 10th, 2012 06:37 am (UTC)