I don't think that Daniel ever actually sneezed on Jack in the movie or very early S1, but there's a hint of symmetry or even payback in that last one that appeals to me. :-)
Enjoyed all of these, #1 and #3 especially. #1 hints at punishment to come but feels gratifyingly complete just as is (what Jane said about the sensation of passing out, well done) (and I'm glad for the preexisting dizziness condition there, since it seems like an awfully fun toy it would be a shame to toss out), but #3 touches on some serious issues that would come up in this relationship ... makes me crave a long consequences/exploration fic ... have you looked at this in any of the previous fics in the series? am I having an attack of premature senility?
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Date: Sep. 9th, 2006 07:13 pm (UTC)Enjoyed all of these, #1 and #3 especially. #1 hints at punishment to come but feels gratifyingly complete just as is (what Jane said about the sensation of passing out, well done) (and I'm glad for the preexisting dizziness condition there, since it seems like an awfully fun toy it would be a shame to toss out), but #3 touches on some serious issues that would come up in this relationship ... makes me crave a long consequences/exploration fic ... have you looked at this in any of the previous fics in the series? am I having an attack of premature senility?