Such a welcome look into Jack's headspace during those absolutely brutal minutes.
My favorite line is He should feel relief. He should feel happiness. He felt like throwing up. I also love that single-word touch of desperation for Daniel at the end; although he has a deeply ingrained reliance on Daniel-his-life-partner-and-other-half, I don't think he consciously thinks things like that very often, so it shows how hard on him this really was, and how much psychological fallout he knows he's in for.
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branchandroot
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Date: May. 16th, 2014 03:28 pm (UTC)My favorite line is He should feel relief. He should feel happiness. He felt like throwing up. I also love that single-word touch of desperation for Daniel at the end; although he has a deeply ingrained reliance on Daniel-his-life-partner-and-other-half, I don't think he consciously thinks things like that very often, so it shows how hard on him this really was, and how much psychological fallout he knows he's in for.
Yowwwwwwwch! In other words: Great job. :-)
And a million thanks for filling the prompt!!