'On Call', gen drabble

[sid]

This strange little thing just came out of the blue last night, when I was musing about prompts: 

ON CALL

 

Jack stayed at Daniel’s bedside into the wee hours, seeking encouragement from the steady heart rhythm on the monitor. But Daniel’s face was a mass of bruises on shockingly pale skin, and there was universal concern that he hadn’t woken yet. So Jack sat and worried.

 

A hand touched his shoulder, and Jack knew he’d fallen asleep. Janet was peering at the monitors. Her hand smoothed over Daniel’s sheets. She turned, smiling. “He’s going to be fine, Colonel.”

 

“It’s General, now, actually.” 

Jack opened his eyes, feeling refreshed and filled with renewed hope. His faith in Janet had never died.

Comments

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

It took me a minute to figure that out, but when I did, I totally melted. I love the idea of Janet looking over them even after she's gone. :D

[discodiva76.livejournal.com]

Oh god...you're really on fire tonight aren't you?.....simply lovely yet again.....*sniffs*....


I'm having such wonderful visuals from these drabbles.....


Deeds xx

[maab-connor.livejournal.com]

i think you just broke my heart a little.

[delphia2000.livejournal.com]

Too sweet! Wahhhaaa! I miss Janet! I miss Jack and Daniel! I miss SG1!

[secondalto.livejournal.com]

Oh yay for Janet, always looking after her patients!

[kazbaby]

*whimper*

Very lovely. I like the idea of her continuing to watch over them.

[sg1danny.livejournal.com]

Awwww...I miss Janet sooooooo much!!!

[magnavox-23.livejournal.com]

Aww, *sniffle* :'(

[princessofg.livejournal.com]

*cries*

[tigerlilly2063.livejournal.com]

What a nice thought that Janet is still out there watching over them.

Lovely. :)

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

Oh man, that just piles on the ouchies.

[jd-junkie.livejournal.com]

You know, Daniel always looks so pretty when he cries. I look like nothing on Earth. See?
So nice to see Janet is still doing the rounds of her infirmary .... I miss her. :-(

Sigh

[eremc.livejournal.com]

I always believed Janet and Jack would be good friends. Friends who shared a great sense of humor and a love a Cassie. It is nice to know she continues to be there for him.
This is heartwarming.
eremc

[starting-gate.livejournal.com]

You is so clever. Perfect Jack response, too. :)

[aurora-novarum.livejournal.com]

Aw! How lovely! What an awesome not-dream moment.

*Misses Janet*

[fhartman.livejournal.com]

Oh. Oh, oh....

This is beautiful, sad, and beautiful. It took me a second, and then - just, yes.

[lokei.livejournal.com]

Aw. Hurrah for Janet, still looking after her number-one problem-team. This is brilliant, sweet, and makes me annoyed they killed Janet all over again.

[damietta.livejournal.com]

Wow, that was just perfect.

(I miss Janet.)

[tresa-cho.livejournal.com]

This deserves daaaawwww on so many levels. Janet *tear*