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jd_junkie and sidlj.
It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.
This is more-or-less how it will work:
You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.
THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.
Let’s wallow, baby!
jd_junkie and sidlj.It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.
This is more-or-less how it will work:
You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.
THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.
Let’s wallow, baby!
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Undercurrent - PG-13 for language
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 05:15 pm (UTC)And there it was again. That background noise, a low level whine, droning on and on and on. It was persistent, steady, and as constant as a fast flowing river, bringing to mind the phrase ‘babbling brook’. Sometimes the noise varied in intensity or volume but it never stopped. Ever. It was distracting as hell. Even more distracting than what had come before it. The noise built again, gaining volume. Gaining speed. Turning petulant.
Daniel felt something inside him go ‘ping!’ as though some limit had been reached and a switch had flipped.
“Oh for God’s sake! Here!” Daniel felt the words explode out of him. “Here’s your damn yo-yo.” With short sharp movements, he pulled the toy from the pocket on his tac vest and flung it, hard. There was a thump and an “oof!” as it hit Jack in the chest. “Now shut up and let me work, you big baby!”
“That’s Colonel Big Baby,” retorted Jack, “and that’s what you get for taking my stuff.”
“If you hadn’t been pestering me with it, I wouldn’t have taken it.”
“I wasn’t pestering," Jack said loftily. "I was creating a socially enriching interactive yo-yo experience. Carter and Teal’c didn’t mind, did you guys?”
Sam’s glare was so emphatic that Daniel could practically hear it, and Teal’c did that ultra-frowny thing with his mouth that made him look like one of muppets.
“See?” Jack willfully ignored his team mates' responses. “They didn’t mind. You need to quit being so touchy.”
Be careful what you wish for, Jack thought Daniel. Pretending to change his mind, he adopted a reasonable tone and said, “You know, you’re right, Jack. I should stop being so touchy. In fact, consider me a no-touch zone.” Narrowing his eyes to slits for emphasis, he could see the moment that Jack understood the subtext.
“Fuck,” said Jack.
“Not likely,” muttered Daniel.
Sam snickered as Teal’c smiled.
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:25 pm (UTC)Re: Undercurrent - PG-13 for language
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 06:07 pm (UTC)Of course Jack's yo-yo-ing would need to be interactive..what an attention hound ;)
Love muppet Teal'c - great description!
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:27 pm (UTC)http://muppet.wikia.com/wiki/Sam_the_Eagle
Glad you liked it!
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 06:32 pm (UTC)Re: Undercurrent - PG-13 for language
Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:31 pm (UTC)I love subtext. And I love my fandom. :D
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 06:35 pm (UTC)Deeds xx
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:32 pm (UTC)Re: Undercurrent - PG-13 for language
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:34 pm (UTC)Hee - that works equally well as a warning about Daniel or a summary of Jack's punishment. :D
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 07:45 pm (UTC)ROFL! Jack as annoying background noise! Perfection! Nice use of baby, too.
No-touch zone. Heehee :D
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 08:30 pm (UTC)Oh, this is lovely! And funny! And the end? Made me laugh a lot!
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 09:05 pm (UTC)And Muppet!mouth Teal'c!
Hee!
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Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 04:28 am (UTC)I love it when dialogue snark includes the presumed insult tacked on to the "Colonel".
Oh, boys and their toys.
Thank you for making me laugh. I needed it!
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Date: Jan. 12th, 2009 07:31 am (UTC)So Jack and Daniel!
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Date: Jan. 13th, 2009 08:21 pm (UTC)And we will not speak of
whatwho Jack's real, favorite yo-yo is. *g*(And I love the details in the first paragraph, the portrayal of Daniel's concentration, and the description of the sound. Way cool.)
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Date: Jan. 13th, 2009 10:26 pm (UTC)Teal’c did that ultra-frowny thing with his mouth that made him look like one of muppets.
That's it! That's it! That's it! I knew I'd seen his frown somewhere before! :D
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Date: Jan. 14th, 2009 03:40 am (UTC)pornromance around. Nicely done. >DRe: Undercurrent - PG-13 for language
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