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It’s time for some commentficcing to offset any post-holiday blues! We'll be running this through Monday, January 19th. There's a supplemental post here for questions and general squeeing.

This is more-or-less how it will work:

You (yes, you, specifically) will write a commentfic or a drabble and post it here as a new comment to the original post. Put a title in the header, if you have one, and maybe a rating or warnings if you think necessary. Crack, porn, romance, sad, silly, dark – however the muse moves you.

THE ONE-AND-ONLY PROMPT: Jack calls Daniel “baby”, or vice-versa. Or both. Because some of us melt and squee and flail when we find that in a fic. And we are not ashamed! We embrace our “baby” kink. We celebrate it.

Let’s wallow, baby!

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Date: Jan. 14th, 2009 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] my-lil-darlin.livejournal.com
WARNING: Sad, angst, character death implied but not stated, by any means.


Faith Comes From Hearing
by Jude

When he surfaced from the anonymous black headspace he'd been in, his hearing was the first sense he regained.

"Baby, baby..." Just a whisper, floating on his returning consciousness, and even in his addled state, he could hear the yearning in those words.

"Wake up, please wake up." A sniff, followed by a muttered low curse and a loud honk as whoever it was unceremoniously blew their nose.

The voice came back after another sniff and a soft, almost gentle clearing of the throat. "Baby, I need you, don't you know that?" A pause. "It's been too long. They said to talk to you, but I don't know what to say, except... I love you. I swear to god, I'll tell you all about it, I'll do anything, if you'll just wake up and look at me. C'mon, baby... open up those beautiful peepers and look at me."

A rustling of bedsheets as the whisper turned into a masculine voice. "Doc..."

"Any reaction, Colonel? Has he moved or shown that he knew you were here?" A woman's voice this time.

"No." A world of sadness. "No."

A few moments of silence. "Doc, what am I gonna do... I mean, what is SG-1 gonna do.... if he..." The sniffing was back.

The next low voice clearly belonged to the doctor. "I know, I know. But don't give up, just keep on talking, okay?" The sound of her footsteps followed her away.

The man's voice was directly in his ear now, gentle but commanding. "You wake up and look at me right this goddamned minute, do you hear me?" The sniffing and nose-blowing was back, and so was the whispering. "I love you, Daniel Jackson, and I need to tell you so. Please don't leave me. I need you, baby."

Before he could try to speak or move, the blackness swallowed Daniel's consciousness once again.

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Date: Jan. 14th, 2009 10:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com
NOOOO!! He wakes up in a day or two! Daniel doesn't die and that's *final*!

*sniff*

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Date: Jan. 15th, 2009 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] my-lil-darlin.livejournal.com
Nope, he doesn't die, not in my universe. 'Course, I wrote the thing, so... everyone's free to write their own happy ending, or wallow in the angst if they want, lol. Me, I love angst and a good cry...
Jude

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Date: Jan. 14th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chattycatsmeow.livejournal.com
He wakes up! He absolutely does!

::whimpers::

right?

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Date: Jan. 15th, 2009 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] my-lil-darlin.livejournal.com
Right, absolutely. I mean, I thought so, when I wrote it.... 'course you never know. Ahem.
Jude

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Date: Jan. 15th, 2009 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] my-lil-darlin.livejournal.com
Definitely on the road back... I mean, don't you think so? I do. Has to be. *hands you a tissue*

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Date: Jan. 15th, 2009 07:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starting-gate.livejournal.com
A world of sadness.

Well, really! Ow.

And we know Daniel survives because, who wouldn't after Jack says all that? :)

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Date: Jan. 15th, 2009 08:47 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] paian
I like the repetition of the 'baby.' Rings true to what people say when they're desperately urging and coaxing, and makes Jack sound all the more desperate.

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Date: Jan. 15th, 2009 10:23 pm (UTC)
ext_3999: (Ruffled)
From: [identity profile] discodiva76.livejournal.com
*sniffs*.......Daniel has to come back to his Jack.....



Deeds xx

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Date: Jan. 16th, 2009 04:09 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lilyleia78
...and then he woke back up, planted a big sloppy kiss on Jack and took him home for some life affirming sex.

Right? Please?

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Date: Jan. 18th, 2009 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mornincamper.livejournal.com
lol! thanks ::sniffle:: I needed that ;)

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Date: Jan. 18th, 2009 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mornincamper.livejournal.com
wow.
::sniffles::

when Jack gives an order, you'd better listen there, Daniel!
Seriously, the commanding and the whispering and the "baby"s - just so honest and...and...::more sniffles::

(no subject)

Date: Jan. 18th, 2009 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] my-lil-darlin.livejournal.com
I honestly don't know where these angsty things come from... I know this little drabble thing implied that Daniel maybe shuffled off this mortal coil, but that wasn't my intention, so you can rest easy... next time he wakes up, he'll be able to feel Jack holding his hand, too. He rarely does anything Jack asks him to do in canon, but this is fic, and this time, he will! Thanks for the nice FB.

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Date: Jan. 19th, 2009 06:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
But

but

but

NOOOOOOOO!

Wake him up! Wake him up now!

//cries//

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Date: Jan. 25th, 2009 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etrangerici.livejournal.com
This broke me. It is only due to raqs' contribution to this list that I am even willing to go on.

That said, this is frelling awesome in a No! No! No! It CAN'T BE! kind of way.

Write more. I can adjust to being broken.

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