Anybody awake?

[sid]

:-) That is to say, is anybody awake and able to do a quick beta on a 550 word J/D NC-17 thingy? I'm mainly concerned as to whether the tense is consistent throughout, or if not consistent, acceptable.

Other comments welcomed of course!

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[sid]

Hee! Okay, where can I send it? Or I could post it here on DW where only you would have access to it. Which sounds best to you?

[stagnation13]

Sending my email address.