Warning: Death-fic drabble

[sid]

So, don't read this if you don't want to...

It's Jack and Daniel, 100 words, character death, future time.

A LIFE, DEFINED 

“We had a lot of fun, didn’t we?”

Daniel swallowed, squeezing Jack’s hand. “Don’t say that like it’s over. I’ll be following you before you know it.”

“Take your time. And if you meet somebody nice, just bring ‘em along.”

“There won’t be anybody else. I could never be this lucky a third time.”

“They say…time’s…charm.” Jack’s voice faded in and out.

Daniel leaned over the bed, and Jack‘s hazy vision was filled with much-loved blue eyes, glistening with tears. “I looked that word up in the dictionary. Charm? Had your picture next to it.”

Jack smiled. His eyes closed.

Comments

[lunachickk.livejournal.com]

Feeling a bit morbid today, dear?

YOU KILLED JACK!

. o O (but your lj theme reminds me of mint chocolate chip ice cream...Mmmmm)

[amnellwyvern.livejournal.com]

*snifflesquee* Very sweet, yet very sad.

[trika.livejournal.com]

Well, at least Daniel was with him. Although....why? O_o

And wot happened to the pr0n? *looks longingly at Sid*

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

Crying now! *glares at you*

[slash-whore27.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was so sad and sweet and touching. I'm going to imagine that they had a long life together and that this wasn't on some battlefield somewhere.

Once again, your drabbles are awesome. (I think you need to write one of your kinky Jack/Daniel stories.) :P

[wraith816.livejournal.com]

Jack shall live forever, dammit!

*glares at you*

(Unless, of course, it's only temporary, and then they can have 'you were dead, but now you're back, yay!' sex!)

[princessofg.livejournal.com]

*wipes eyes*

i don't mind death fic when they're old and together. truly.

[delphia2000.livejournal.com]

Apparently they were wrong...it didn't with a bang or a whimper! ;o) I thought it was sweet, Sid. I like.

[lucifrix.livejournal.com]

Aw man. I want to die like that.

Wibble

[captainlogic.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOD YOU KILLED JACK!!!
In a nice loving, Daniel was by his side way but STILL. You killed Jack. I shall forgive you but only cos its beautiful.
*wanders off in search of chocolate. Remembers is on stupid diet. Cries on floor instead*
Humph

[cerianite.livejournal.com]

WAHHHH!!!! Awww Sid That was really good and you had Jack and Daniel together in the end and that's the way it should be. You go girl :-)