Snippet Wordle

[sid]

(in lieu of actual fic)



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Comments

[freyasboy]

Oh wow! That's great. It's taken me ages to read all the words.

I'd love to see someone make a fic of this, using every single word. Mmm!!!

Thanks, sid

Chris xx

[sid]

Well, I have a 544 word snippet of a fic, without a beginning or an end. If I ever write the beginning, which might not be too hard to do, I may post the end result at arboreal_gate and see if someone picks up the ball and runs with it, because I have no idea where it might be heading!

[heather_mist]

Wow that is cool! For some reason the upper right corner caught my attention - nipped, hard-on, solid.... *g*

[jdjunkie]

Seeing the words "neck came" together took me to some very weird places. Heh.

[paian]

Lots of first, tongue, head, feel, made, and Daniel's ... this looks to be a very enjoyable story!

I like the little yeah pulse want line. It sounds like a FUCKYEAHPULSE Tumblr, whatever that would be.

::looks down at comments:: Ooh, Arboreal Gate would be delighted to have it. But I'll also be delighted if you get charged up to finish it!

[princessofgeeks]

HEE

[sid]

My favorite bit is on the left, under the word 'talk'. If you read it right to left it says "never going back." Very appropriate and romantic for a first-time fic... although things are never that simple. *eg*

[sid]

*checks document* You can relax! :-D

[sid]

I might tack on a suitable beginning, but as is it ends on a whopper of a cliffhanger, and I have absolutely no idea what's going on! Does that work, when the author is as completely in the dark as the characters are? *sighs dramatically*

[sid]

No heeing, it's an angstfest! ;-)

Like so: After a second of shock, Jack was on his knees, fumbling for his cell with one hand and Daniel's pulse with the other.

[princessofgeeks]

oh.

then, AIEEEE

[sid]

YES! :-D

[feroxargentea]

Why is you discontent when you has Wordle??

[sid]

Oh, discontented because I have this germ of a story but no idea where to go with it. The Wordle doesn't show the snippet's Cliffhanger Ending!

[paian]

It definitely works! I had no idea what to do with that Teal'c-showering snippet way back when, and the comm ::looks at you:: ::and PoG:: made two whole fics out of it. The comm's meant to be a home for stories that have stumped their authors as much as for starting new stories to see what happens. And cliffhangers are fun. *g*

[lolmac]

I'm quietly giggling that 'laundry' made it into the wordle, amongst all the more likely words.

[sid]

Talk about a rock and a hard place. Talk about the imminent need to do laundry.

See how it fits right in? :-D