Of Human Bondage, rated PG, Sha're and Amaunet

[sid]

A double drabble set early in Season One. The first half came to me while I was reading a fanfic that mentioned Sha're, and the second half came to me after I wrote the first half, because there had to be more. Point and counterpoint...

Of Human Bondage

She couldn't push him away; she couldn't close her eyes and not see. She couldn't deny his mastery of her body; couldn't ignore his exquisitely careful touch, or the passion of the kisses seared upon her lips. His skin was warm and sleek; the play of his muscles beneath her hands spoke to her womanhood. He whispered words of love and adoration, and her head twisted this way and that, not to escape them, but in obscene response to them.

She couldn't escape her prison or her torment. All she could do was repeat, over and over, "Danyel, save me."

~~

I pull my Lord close to me and drink in his beloved face, drown in his eyes. His hands pluck and strum me like an instrument; I sing to his command. I open to his kisses and return them with redoubled heat. Joy springs within me as his body covers mine, all power, all virility, harnessed then majestically unleashed. Eyes, mouth, hands, and manhood worship and praise me. I am not worthy, yet I am beloved. My Lord, my God, moves within me, and all that I am, all that I have, reaches out, yearns, strives…

Behold, I am delivered.

Comments

[freyasboy]

Oh, I do like that, sid.

Poor Sha're. Locked away inside her own body. And Amaunet - joyous in the fact that she is with her beloved again.

As you say ... point and counterpoint.

Chris xx

[sid]

I don't know how anyone survives being a host. Of course, most hosts don't survive at all...

[magnavox-23.livejournal.com]

Wow. This is amazing. <3

[lolmac]

Maybe Magnavox will be inspired to do an accompanying manip? Mmmm?

[sid]

Thank you, dear. I was quite proud of my brain!

[discodiva76]

Stunning....and very very moving....:( :(

[sid]

Thank you. Amaunet's counterpoint was needed to balance out the tragedy, but the tragedy continues on and on. :-(

[princessofgeeks]

*cries*

I really need to write more Sha're....

[sid]

*hands you tissues*

Sha're is a deep well of stories.

[jdjunkie]

Oh, wow. That is powerful and more than a little wibble-inducing.

{{{{{Sha'uri}}}}}}

[sid]

It hurts to think about, and of course Daniel has to think about it, too. :-/

[heather_mist]

Hmm, problem - I don't actually know these characters other than in the very vaguest terms... but as a description of the conditions of love/torment/angst/pleasure - *adores*.

[sid]

All you need to know is that Sha're, wife of Daniel, is an unwilling host to the parasitical Goa'uld Amaunet, Queen of the System Lord Apophis.

There! All explained. LOL.

But I'm glad it could be appreciated on its own merits. :-)

[heather_mist]

Ah - thank you for the explanation!
I knew who Sha're was and that she was Daniels' wife, but not the rest. Poor, poor Shar're! *meeps* And Apophis, of all the system lords, it had to be him... *shudders and meeps again*

I did appreciate it on its own merits, I appreciate it even more now that I really know what is going on.

[ivorygates]

This is gorgeous. Thank you!

[sid]

Thank you for saying!

[watervole]

Great contrasts.

[sid]

Thank you! Their situations couldn't have been any more different.

[lolmac]

WOW. *pant*

[sid]

I deem your response to be acceptable. *G*

[(Anonymous)]

Just...wow, beautifully written!

Monkey :)

[sid]

Thanks, hon!

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Yikes.

[sid]

Yeah, that's about the size of it. :-/

[antares04a.livejournal.com]

Poor Sha're and poor Daniel! I love how totally different the two drabbles sound! The first sounds so "true" and the second so solemn and not really like love.

[sid]

I guess Amaunet and Apophis were really in love...until she decided to hide Shifu from him! But they might still be in the honeymoon phase, here. ;-)