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(I recently went through my DW imported entries for 2006 and the beginning of 2007, updating tags, and decided I needed to archive this final chapter of If You Really Loved Me that was posted to [community profile] smutday on Valentine's Day 2007. Here is Part One. If I do this right you should be able to follow the DW links 1-2-3-4. Let me know if I've screwed up! And apologies for weird formatting and whatnot. So long ago!)

Part Four


It was the fingertips stroking his ribcage that woke up Jack up. His hand flew up automatically, but his brain engaged in time for him to catch at Daniel’s wrist fairly gently. “Hey!”

“Hey,” Daniel answered.

Jack cocked his head. That had been an interesting note in Daniel’s voice. His breath hitched. “Oh, is it morning?”

“Normally?” Daniel said, resuming his exploration of Jack’s chest. “I’d say no, because dawn is really more the tail end of the night as far as I’m concerned.”

“But…” Jack prompted, enjoying the low murmur of Daniel’s voice in the still-dark room.

“But I’m willing to make an exception.”

“Sleep is overrated,” Jack said with a grin, sliding his arm around Daniel. He exhaled a puff of air and felt his cock jump eagerly. “You’ve lost your tee-shirt.”


“You naked all over?”

“Wanna find out?”

Jack slid his hand lower, and found warm, bare flesh. “Unless you’re wearing socks…”

“No socks,” Daniel whispered before his mouth descended.

The kissing didn’t last long. “Morning breath,” they both grimaced.

“We could go gargle,” Jack suggested slyly as he brought his hand around to locate Daniel’s cock.

“Nngh!” Daniel gasped. “Better things to do…”

Jack stroked gently and saw the glimmer of Daniel’s eyes disappear behind closed lids. “Oh, yeah. Speaking of which. What, uh, what exactly…”

Daniel’s eyes reappeared. “This morning I want whatever you want, because I figure you’ve probably got it all planned out.”

“I’ll try not to let you down,” Jack said seriously. Then he grinned. “This I know you’ll like.” He shifted away from Daniel, and began to scoot down the bed. He laid a hand on Daniel’s stomach. “Okay if I skip the foreplay?”

There was enough light to see Daniel’s nod. Jack lowered his head and swiped his tongue along the underside of Daniel’s cock. “Ah!” Again, and again. A hand landed on his head. He took Daniel into his mouth. “Screw the foreplay!” Daniel panted. “Oh, Jack!”

Warm, hard, salty, and smooth. Rapidly becoming slick with Jack’s saliva. He pulled back a little, and could just see Daniel's cock glistening in the faint light. How many times had he fantasized about this? He knew he was no champion at giving head; not enough practice to get really good at it. But he had an innate enthusiasm for the act, and he planned to make up for lost time from now on.

He swirled his tongue around the head, tasting Daniel’s first drops of pre-come. They exploded on his tongue and he moaned. He felt Daniel stroking his hair. “Oh, Jack! So good, love it, want you…” Daniel’s voice trailed off as his hips twisted underneath Jack’s ministrations.

Jack engulfed Daniel’s cock again and began to slide his mouth up and down. He sucked as hard as he could, and Daniel’s back arched, pushing the cock deeper into his throat. On the verge of gagging, Jack pulled back slightly and wrapped his thumb and forefinger around the base to give himself breathing room.

Daniel’s breathing was louder and harsher now. Jack could feel the tension building in his body. He rubbed the heel of his hand roughly against Daniel’s balls, and Daniel cried out. Jack picked up his tempo, keeping his cheeks hollowed around Daniel’s shaft. Both of Daniel’s hands were on his head now, clutching at him hard, but not pressing him downward.

Jack appreciated the restraint, but his mind couldn’t help going to a time when Daniel might throw caution to the winds and really let himself fuck Jack in the mouth, holding him tightly in place. Jack gulped down oxygen through his nose and rubbed his aching cock against the sheets. So many things to look forward to, not least of which would be his first swallow of Daniel’s come.

Daniel was groaning now; deep groans; almost painful sounding.

Jack quickly raised his head halfway, and squeezed Daniel’s tight balls gently. “Jaaa. Uh. Ah.” Warm fluid hit the roof of Jack’s mouth. He swallowed. Very salty and a little bitter. He squeezed Daniel’s balls again. More semen on his tongue, and he swirled it around Daniel’s cock and sucked and licked it off. The hands that had been clutching his head fell away.

Jack rose to his knees and worked his way between Daniel’s lax thighs. Holding his own cock, giving it a pull or two as he moved. Then settling down over Daniel’s body, placing his erection next to Daniel’s wet, still-hard cock, beginning to move.

Daniel’s eyes opened and there was enough light now to see the bright blue of the glazed stare. “Daniel,” Jack said tightly, working his hips, rubbing himself against the firm, warm body beneath him. He felt his heart racing in his chest.

This was really happening.

Daniel’s arms wrapped around him. Strong hands rubbed at the sweat-damp skin of his back and neck. “Love you,” Jack gasped, as his eyes slid shut and his body exploded. His jerking hips sent his cock sliding through his own semen, over Daniel’s belly, brushing against his softening erection.

‘Yes,” Daniel said. Jack shot again, and collapsed, shuddering. Golden light at the window, the smell of sex in the air. A warm embrace, lungs straining for much-needed oxygen. “Yes.” Daniel’s voice, shaking. “Yes, Jack.”

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Date: Apr. 6th, 2014 08:35 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jdjunkie
Just checked the links and they are fine, baby!

I plan to read this later. That will make it a Very Happy Sunday for meeee!


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Date: Apr. 6th, 2014 11:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jdjunkie
I'm sure it won't be cringey AT ALL!!

In other news: I see we're both soup stirring! YAY! I picked Meridian. I hate myself sometimes. ;-)

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Date: Apr. 6th, 2014 12:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jdjunkie
LOVE me some Janet. :-)

Mine will be all about ... angst. Qu'elle surprise!

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Date: Apr. 7th, 2014 11:09 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jdjunkie

I was thinking along the lines of Meridian: The Laugh Out Loud Remix. Maybe not.

As for Jack and Jonas bonding - so far from canon compliant as to be positively AU. HAH!!!! (take that banana boy).

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Date: Apr. 7th, 2014 11:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] princessofgeeks
I picked Demons!

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Date: Apr. 8th, 2014 09:32 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jdjunkie
You're writing, too! YAY! This is going to an awesome soup. Also ... I like Demons a lot. It's one of those eps that never garners much attention but I really enjoy it. Can't wait to see your fic!


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Date: Apr. 7th, 2014 07:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] angelsallfire
My monday has been vastly improved by this :D Thank you.

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Date: Apr. 7th, 2014 11:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] princessofgeeks
I am so very glad you reposted this, because I had never read it. You must have written it just before I got into this fandom.

It's lovely. Thank you so much. Wonderful view of them in season 8.


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