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Since I haven't written anything new, I'll just have to share something old.

My second story, written in November, 2004.

It's NC-17, BDSM, J/D, PWP, etc.

LATE NIGHT SNACK

It was well after ten o’clock at night, and Daniel Jackson was sitting at the kitchen table, eating. He had worked late at the Mountain on a translation that had been plaguing him for several days. When it had all started to fall into place, he wasn’t about to stop working until he could finish with the damned thing altogether. When he had finally closed up the lab and headed for home, he called Jack from his cell phone to let him know. By the time he arrived at home, Jack had prepared a light meal for him. Which he was eating somewhat absentmindedly, still thinking about the translation, going over things again. And again. Okay, gotta stop that, he told himself firmly. He took another bite of his food, actually paying attention to the taste for the first time. “This is very good, Jack. Thank you.”

“You’re welcome.” replied a voice from underneath the table. Jack O’Neill sat cross-legged on the floor, which was not easy on his knees, but hey, the things we do for love, right? He was nude except for a black leather collar, and had his body as close as possible to Daniel’s chair. By pulling on the rungs of the chair, he was able to move his upper body further between Daniel’s widespread thighs. He put his chin on the chair seat, gazing fondly at Daniel’s jeans-clad crotch. He pressed his face forward until his nose touched his lover, and inhaled happily. It was good to have Daniel home.

Daniel paused in his eating. “Jack,” he said slowly, “did I give you permission to touch me?” Jack pulled his head back with a sound of frustration. Daniel was smiling as he asked, “Did you have something you wanted to say, Jack?”

“Well, Daniel, it’s actually kinda boring down here. Not that I’m not admiring the view, mind you.”

Daniel grinned. And took another bite of his food, chewing it slowly. Then he said “You may unzip my pants, and take out my cock.” It was Jack’s turn to grin, as he reached out and carefully unzipped his lover’s pants, and eagerly pulled out Daniel’s cock. He held it firmly in one hand, and petted it with the other, meanwhile enjoying this extreme close-up view of one of his favorite sights in the world. Make that many worlds. “Did you do what I told you, Jack?” Huh? thought Jack. “Did you unzip my pants, and take out my cock?”

Jack had a confused frown on his face. “Uh, can’t you tell?”

Daniel bit back a laugh. “Then why are you still touching me?” Dead silence from underneath the table, as hands were quickly removed from the object of their desire. Daniel resumed eating. Only to stop once again, when he felt warm breath blowing on his slowly hardening prick. “Jack,” he said in a warning tone.

“You’re no fun tonight.” complained Jack, with his mouth so close to Daniel’s cock that the other man could feel every puff of air as he spoke.

“And you’re being very naughty tonight.”

“I could be a whole lot naughtier if you’d give me the chance.” Jack grumbled.

Daniel took his last bite of food, and pushed the empty plate away. “That was really very tasty, Jack. Are you sure that you’re not hungry?”

Jack made a point of hesitating before he replied, “I could eat”. Both men had identical smiles on their faces, obscured from each other’s sight by the table between them. Daniel was almost fully erect now. Jack’s eyes drank in the beautiful sight. Daniel slouched back in his chair, scooting his bottom forward a few inches in the process. Jack made a humming sound of pure happiness. His own cock was partially erect, but his focus was entirely on Daniel.

“I think you should have a snack, too.” Daniel offered. “I don’t want your stomach rumbling later on.” He reached under the table with one hand and began to stroke Jack’s hair. “You know I don’t like to be distracted when I’m giving you a spanking.” Bingo! Now Jack’s erection rivaled Daniel’s. “Naughty colonels get what they’ve got coming to them. Of course, we both know that you were counting on that. Your bottom can be so insatiable.”

“Danny, let me…” Jack begged. Daniel’s hand pulled his head forward, until Jack was pressed lightly against his prick. Jack kept his mouth closed, not an easy task, but he hadn’t been given permission to do anything else yet. Daniel’s other hand took hold of his own erection, and moved it up and down, and in circles against Jack’s face. Jack closed his eyes, and enjoyed the sensation fully.

“Open up,” Daniel said. Jack opened his mouth and his eyes. Daniel was operating blindly here, so Jack would have to help with the navigation. Seconds later Daniel slid himself home into Jack’s warm mouth, producing a moan from both men. Jack began to slide up and down his lover’s prick, laving it with his tongue and savoring the taste that he craved. His own erection pressed against his stomach, demanding attention. But he knew better than to touch himself. That was never allowed without explicit orders. And he knew he could rely on Daniel to take care of him later, which would be much more pleasurable, anyway. Even the ache of waiting for satisfaction was pleasurable, in its own way. On the other hand, no need to draw things out, he thought with an inward smile. And began to suck harder, at the same time reaching inside Daniel’s jeans for his balls, which were so an erogenous zone for his Danny.

Daniel’s hand fisted in Jack’s silver hair, and his other hand smacked palm first against the table. Jack swallowed Daniel as deeply as he could, and stopped all movement. Except for his hand which continued to play with the other man’s testicles, rolling and squeezing them, not always gently. Daniel’s breathing was getting louder and louder as he grew nearer to his climax. “Jack!” he called out, throwing back his head. Jack resumed his up and down motions, rapidly now. Come for me, come for me. Daniel grunted, and came, pouring his seed down Jack’s throat. Jack drank it down greedily, and sucked even harder. Daniel’s cock twitched and spurted again as he moaned Jack’s name. His fist slowly uncurled, and his hand stroked Jack’s head. Jack held still, and gently swirled his tongue around Daniel’s softening prick.

Daniel pulled out of Jack’s mouth with a hiss, and sat there in the kitchen chair, boneless and blissful. Jack placed his hands on Daniel’s knees, and pressed hard kisses onto the inside of Daniel’s thighs. Don’t forget about me. His cock throbbed. Dyin’ down here. Daniel stirred above him, back among the living once more. The chair was pushed back, and Daniel stood up, holding onto the table as his knees felt a little wobbly. He bent over, and for the first time since he sat down to eat, he looked into his partner’s face. The two men exchanged loving smiles. Then his gaze was drawn to Jack’s painful-looking erection. “Bedroom. Now.”

~~

Daniel stood in front of the bedroom closet where he and Jack kept their “toys” on two shelves. He knew he had a couple of minutes before Jack would make it in from the kitchen. He would be moving pretty slowly, considering how long he had sat on the kitchen floor. Daniel could feel guilty about the strain on Jack’s knees caused by certain positions that were entered into on his orders, but Jack had made it clear early on that he was fully capable of saying no when necessary. Daniel’s eyes gleamed as he remembered the sight of Jack’s swollen cock. That will slow him down, too.

He turned his attention to the contents of the closet shelves. Clamps, restraints, paddles, blindfolds, gags, dildos, vibrators, floggers. And one bamboo cane that stood in the corner, and was seldom used. Daniel always felt uneasiness about using the cane on Jack. Sometimes, when one or both of them were at just the right pitch of excitement, the cane was absolutely perfect. But it scared Daniel a little, just how much he enjoyed the marks that the bamboo implement left on his lover’s skin. They fascinated him; he loved to stroke the marks, lick and kiss them. He didn’t understand the way they made him feel, and he always felt that somehow Jack was being left out of the equation, that it was too much about himself, and his pleasure. But Jack sometimes asked specifically to be caned, so obviously he did enjoy it. In moderation, at any rate. Certainly, Daniel would never consider using the cane to punish Jack. But there would be no cane tonight.

Daniel’s hand glided over items on the shelves. He picked up a bandana they used as a gag. He wasn’t really in the mood to gag Jack, but he would ask Jack if he wanted it. He liked to give Jack choices. About some things. He picked up a set of adjustable nipple clamps, with a detachable heavy chain. He would put Jack over his knee, and the chain would swing with every blow he delivered. Such a pretty picture! His cock, so recently sated, began to take an interest in the proceedings. He cupped his groin. Not too much longer. Jack wasn’t going to need much to put him over the edge tonight. Daniel would start with his hand; but if his palm got sore, or Jack did take longer to reach orgasm, he would need something else. He picked up a hairbrush with a smile. Sometimes old-fashioned was the way to go….

Daniel heard Jack in the hallway, and turned to face the door, his hands holding the items he had selected from the closet. When Jack entered the bedroom, Daniel immediately instructed him, “Get the chair.” Jack nodded, with a faint smile, and crossed the room to get the straight-backed, armless chair that stood against one wall. He moved it into a spot near the center of the room. Daniel bent and put the hairbrush on the floor next to the chair. “You’ll hand that to me when I ask for it.” Jack nodded again, his eyes fixed on the brush. Daniel crossed the floor to where Jack stood, and Jack’s eyes rose to meet his. Daniel held out the bandana. “Do you want to be gagged, Jack?” Jack licked his lips, and shook his head no.

Daniel let the bandana flutter to the ground, and held up the nipple clamps. Jack’s eyes moved up from the clamps, to Daniel’s face, and he lifted his chin slightly. His chest rose and fell with a deep breath. Daniel stepped forward, and stroked Jack’s tight buds for a moment, before applying the clamps. He had adjusted the tension screws already, so that they would not pinch Jack too severely, but would hold the weight of the soon-to-be-swinging chain easily. With the clamps fastened in place, Daniel bent his head and licked at the parts of Jack’s nipples that his tongue could still reach. Jack shifted his weight and lifted a hand to Daniel’s shoulder, breathing through an open mouth. His eyes glazed over. Daniel straightened up, and focused on that lovely mouth, touching it with his own, and then thrusting his tongue deeply inside. Jack’s hand clutched his shoulder, fingers digging into his flesh..

Daniel stepped back. Yes, Jack was very close to the edge. He went over to the waiting chair, and sat down, beckoning Jack with a crooked finger. Jack came over and stood very close to him. Daniel reached up and touched Jack’s cock for the first time. So hot! “Over my lap, Jack.” Jack positioned himself across Daniel’s knees, tucking his prick down between Daniel’s denim-covered thighs. His toes touched the ground on one side of the chair, and his hands on the other side. The chain between the nipple clamps swung free, its weight causing a delicious ache.

“You’ve been asking for this all night, Jack. I hope you’re ready for it.” Daniel said, laying his warm hand on his lover’s butt, and rubbing slowly. Jack twisted his neck, and placed a kiss on Daniel’s calf. Yes, more than ready. Daniel’s hand rose and fell, leaving a pink imprint on the left cheek of Jack’s bottom. Jack’s body jerked silently. It was only the beginning.

Daniel’s firm hand continued to rain stinging blows on his lover’s reddening ass. Jack panted loudly, and nonstop now. Now a painful crack against the back of one thigh, causing his head to bob up and down, and setting the chain that dangled from his nipples into violent motion. A loud moan. Music to Daniel’s ears. More of that. He smiled and quickly raised his hand to his mouth, licking his fingers, before repeating his previous action, on the opposite thigh. Again. Lower. Now higher. Lick again. Back to the ass.

Jack’s hips were in constant motion now. He was fucking his prick between Daniel’s thighs, rubbing against the fabric roughly. Daniel, Daniel, Daniel. “Lie still!” Daniel snapped. Jack’s movements halted, and a high-pitched whine emerged from his tight throat. “Hairbrush!” Jack gasped, fumbled on the floor, and handed the brush to Daniel. Crack! Oh, god! Almost there. Daniel’s face was flushed; his cock pressed painfully against the jeans that confined him. Crack!

Jack could feel the beginnings of his orgasm. “Daniel!”

Crack! “Come!” Daniel shouted. Crack! Yes! Jack happily slid over the edge, spurting his release between his lover’s thighs, body jerking, sweat dripping, hands clenching on the floor. Crack! One final blow, one final spurt, draining his nuts dry, leaving him twitching and gasping across Daniel’s lap. Daniel dropped the hairbrush and held onto Jack’s body firmly, until the other man finally grew still. His eyes gleamed with lust as he surveyed Jack’s bright red buttocks with immense pleasure.

“Get up, Jack.” Daniel ordered. Jack complied slowly, still dazed and breathless. “Go to the bed. Lay your chest across the bed, feet on the floor, legs spread wide.” As Jack followed his instructions, Daniel rose from his chair with some difficulty, and went to the nightstand to get lube. He stood behind Jack, and reached down to feel the heat radiating from his ass. Daniel stroked Jack for a moment, savoring the sensation, as he always did. He knew, from conversations with Jack, that the other man enjoyed these moments as much as he did. That knowledge only heightened his pleasure. He and his partner were in silent communion. He smiled, then straightened up, unzipped and lowered his jeans, and flipped open the top of the tube he held.

Daniel squeezed lube into the palm of his hand, and slicked his fist up and down his cock. He bent his knees to line himself up to enter the other man. Jack was willing, experienced, relaxed and desperately in love. He didn’t require any other preparation. Daniel thrust in hard. Jack’s mouth gaped open, and he clawed at the bed sheets with his hands. Oh, fuck. Danny. Daniel pulled his head back, looking down to watch his shiny cock sliding between Jack’s reddened buttocks. He grunted in satisfaction at the sight, and, after a few more strokes, shifted his weight forward and placed his hands on the bed on either side of his lover. Jack groaned as the angle he was being shafted from changed, resulting in his rectum being rubbed in new spots. His thighs quivered from the strain of keeping his legs so far apart. His clamped nipples rubbed painfully against the sheets beneath his chest. It was all for Daniel‘s pleasure. He was in heaven.

Daniel continued to pound into Jack’s warmth. His arms were shaking with the strain of supporting his upper body, as his hips powered his driving cock back and forth, in and out. Unintelligible words began to spill from his lips. Jack knew that was a sign that Daniel was almost ready to come. Jack worked the muscles of his ass, squeezing Daniel’s cock, begging silently to be filled with his lover’s semen. Daniel’s strokes grew erratic, and then with a hoarse cry, he shot his seed deep within Jack, and collapsed on top of him. Jack continued to squeeze, as best he could with Daniel’s dead weight crushing him into the mattress. Daniel moaned, as his prick was milked again and again by Jack’s greedy ass. Two more spurts of fluid shot deep inside Jack, whose eyelids fluttered shut. He had felt that.

The two men lay together for a minute more, before Daniel regained enough control over his body to lift his weight off of Jack. From a shaky standing position, he crawled up onto the bed, and collapsed onto his back, with his head on one of the pillows. Jack followed his example, and laid on his side, facing toward his lover. An enormous yawn stretched Daniel’s mouth. He rolled onto his side and smiled at Jack. Then his eyes widened in horror. The nipple clamps! He had completely forgotten them. “Oh, my god, Jack, I am so sorry, so sorry!” There was no way at this point to remove them without causing Jack quite a bit of pain, so he wasted no time in trying to be gentle, and simply removed them as quickly and carefully as he could. Jack couldn’t help wincing and hissing, despite his desire not to add to Daniel’s feelings of guilt. “Oh, Jack.”

“It’s all right, Daniel,” Jack tried to convince the other man, “there’s no harm done. They’re just a little sore now that all the excitement is over. They were fine, they were good before.” Daniel was shaking his head, angry with himself for not taking better care of his lover. Jack trusted him implicitly, and this carelessness was no way to repay that loving trust. The clamps should have come off as soon as Jack climaxed in his lap. The resultant increased blood flow….they must have been painful from that moment on, and then they were pressed against the bed! He stared at the poor, pinched nipples, horrified. “Daniel, look at me,” Jack begged. Daniel tore his gaze away from Jack’s chest, and looked mournfully into his eyes. Jack smiled gently at his lover, and said softly, “Maybe you could kiss them better?”

THE END

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Date: Feb. 7th, 2006 03:55 pm (UTC)

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Date: Feb. 7th, 2006 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/
*tilts head to the side* Riiiiiight, a BDSM story (and btw? *guh*) followed by a smileyface emoticon. Huh. *tilts head to the other side* Huh.

Anyway, have you ever collected your BDSM stories in one place? Like the Intensity AU?

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Date: Feb. 8th, 2006 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trika.livejournal.com
OK, I know I've read that before. Didn't stop me from reading it again. *vbg*

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Date: Feb. 8th, 2006 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trika.livejournal.com
*head/desk* And here I was in the mood for a late night snack and thought this was the open buffet. *g*

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Date: Feb. 8th, 2006 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trika.livejournal.com
Don't tease me!

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