'Forbidden Fruit', Daniel, NC-17
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A companion piece to Solo Flight, Jack, NC-17.
Beta kudos to
fiareynneand
juliabk (who also gets the credit for the story title), and a big thank you to
dustandrosesfor an idea she gave me in her comment to Jack's story. :-)
Warnings: het, BDSM, masturbation
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Warnings: het, BDSM, masturbation
FORBIDDEN FRUIT
Two months before How It All Began
There was a limit to what porn could do for you, no matter how good it was, or how many of your buttons it pushed. This one was pretty good, and the two men were attractive, but Daniel’s mind kept wandering. He wanted to be doing, not watching. He stroked a slick hand idly up his cock. Maybe it was time for a trip to Denver. He squeezed the top of his cock, smiling at his body’s instant reaction to that idea. He could do it next weekend; it wouldn’t be a problem.
The club in Denver was discreet, but he still kept his visits to a minimum. Submissive men were always thick on the ground there, longing for a Dom to make them feel alive, to fulfill their fantasies. He could let his most forceful side come out to play when he was there. His needs would build up during his time away from the club, and the release of tension was always exquisite.
Not sexual tension, per se. He wasn’t there to have orgasms. He really wasn’t interested in coming with strangers. He simply craved the power. Men kneeling at his feet, granting him the right to do with their bodies as he chose. To give them pain and pleasure and release. Most of them wanted to come, but not all by any means. Some just needed the release from their daily stresses that came with complete submission.
Daniel preferred the ones who wanted orgasm; the others always seemed a little sad to him, but he was prepared to torment and abuse them on occasion, if the mood struck him right. But, to him, the natural ending of a scene was when he would give permission to come, and the body of his willing subject would stiffen and spasm, and, finally, melt into boneless oblivion.
So much better than tears, although tears were welcome enough in conjunction with a good come, or leading up to it. Although stranger’s tears could never touch him the way a lover’s could. Especially if that lover were a man. Women’s tears came more easily, held less meaning for him.
He would never dominate a woman again, anyway. Not after Sha’re. Daniel smiled at the actors on the TV screen, one man placing intricately knotted ropes on the other’s body. Not that he had dominated her. Hardly. Sha’re was a chieftain’s daughter, and submission was not in her vocabulary, in any language. But she had been sensual and playful, and willing to please her husband in many things.
She had been absolutely stunning bound with colorful scarves. Which served equally well when used as a gag or blindfold. The first time he had covered her eyes, her cheeks had flooded with dusky red and her lips had parted in a soundless gasp. She had reached for him with desperate hands, pulling him onto her, into her…
The bound man on the screen was wincing as his nipples were clamped. No clamps available on Abydos, but he’d had his teeth and his hands, and Sha’re had wriggled and gasped and cried out as he had abused her tender flesh lovingly. Daniel put a hand to his chest and rolled his own nipple between his fingertips, feeling the sensation shooting down to his groin.
Sha’re hadn’t wanted to be spanked. Too noisy in their claustrophobically close community, and too demeaning. Naughty children were spanked; naughty wives likewise. To be overheard would be humiliating, and to have her Danyel treat her so would make her unhappy. She would lay across his lap and let him caress her lovely ass and finger her while she whispered his name and jerked her hips, but how he had longed to see his handprint etched upon her skin. He murmured an endearment in Abydonian as he watched the dominant on the screen feeding his cock into his partner’s eager mouth.
No more women for him. His fantasies, like his reality, centered solely around men now. There was one man at the SGC in particular who excited him. He pictured him now, on his knees, with Daniel’s cock in his mouth. Cheeks hollowed, long lashes fluttering against his skin. Hands bound behind his back, cock hard and weeping at the tip. Daniel’s fist tightened its grip. His own cock was weeping now, and the added slickness coated his palm and sped his stroke.
He was tall and lean. He looked military tough, he talked tough, he even walked tough. He was a living recruitment poster. But his lashes were enthralling, and he flushed sometimes when Daniel spoke to him, and the young lieutenant filled his fantasies these days. Bound, gagged, over his knee, taking his cock up the ass. Red, red ass. To have a Marine submit would be very nearly the ultimate power trip.
But not quite the ultimate; not for Daniel. The fantasy that he avoided thinking about was the true ultimate. To have power over the man who had nominal power over him. Oh, and he was tall and lean, too; walked and talked tough. Just the sort who might need the kind of release that Daniel’s skills could provide.
But he was Daniel’s team leader and best friend, and it was better not to even go there. It was all just fantasy, but there were safer subjects from which to choose. A galaxy full of them. But he was sexy, and he was handsome, and Daniel knew that he could be beautiful. Daniel could make him beautiful, and that thought made him ache a little inside.
The dominant on the screen pulled his cock out of the sub’s mouth and shot his sperm onto his face, fist pumping, filthy words coming from his mouth. Daniel barely noticed, and the face that he concentrated on fiercely as he came was Lieutenant Glenn’s.
But the name half-formed on his lips belonged to someone else.
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 03:49 pm (UTC)This is a great insight into Daniel and what he was feeling before Jack. And what a surprise you threw in there with the Lieutenant. Daniel not fantasizing about Jack even though that's who he really wants. Well done, Sid. *applauds*
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 04:54 pm (UTC)The difference between the two of them is that Daniel knew exactly what he wanted; but he never expected Jack to fall into his hands the way he did!
:-D
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 03:54 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 04:51 pm (UTC)Oh, well!
*g*
*smooches you*
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 06:01 pm (UTC)I post Jack and Daniel masturbation fic.
Sid posts Daniel masturbtion fic.
I like the way we think. ;-)
I'm glad you did this. I like the peek into what Daniel likes about D/s. And most excellent last line!
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 06:31 pm (UTC)Glad you liked!!
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 06:53 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 07:49 pm (UTC)But we know they're gonna be golden for at least the next 10 years! *contented sigh*
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 01:35 am (UTC)*fans self*
*combusts*
I r ded.
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 03:38 am (UTC):-D
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 02:24 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 03:59 am (UTC)I've been avoiding these stories because of *coughhetcough* (Shau're bores me to tears except the narrative past tense) and the BDSM(I'll get to that in a sec). BUT I liked what you did here.
So... um, I tended to avoid your BDSM because of something you wrote a *long* time ago--and no, I don't recall what it was, I just disagreed with it, and my bad memory isn't all that useful for the critical feedback you'd ask for, so erm, don't ask. I only remember it being of a different understanding of BDSM, that's all--Now, it *was* a long time ago. And goddess knows that the shit I wrote a long time ago can't be compared to the stuff I write right now, so that said, (I'm hearing Ba'al, threatening the Earth) I decided to put my silly-assed hesitation away about the het and BDSM and just bloody read.
And I'm glad. :)
Now tell Julia to be quiet and stop goading. :-p
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 02:20 pm (UTC)Here's the link to How It All Began if you wanna see what happens next. http://sidlj.livejournal.com/1065.html
And I only wish I knew what you didn't like so I could tell you, "Hey, I still do that, so continue to avoid." I know I've evolved as a writer, but I don't think this BDSM universe has changed very much. Well, maybe from the first 2 or 3 stories, I suppose.
I don't imagine any two BDSM experiences, actual or fictual, would be completely identical, because no two brains are alike, for starters.
Julia, be quiet??? Are we talking about the same woman, woman? :-D
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 06:45 am (UTC)I like this phrase, "abused her tender flesh lovingly".
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 02:24 pm (UTC)Daniel is an artist, and Sha're would have been a gorgeous subject to work with.
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 01:42 pm (UTC)I love the stuff with Sha're. Thank you for not forgetting that Daniel had a wife whom he actually cared for quite deeply. I think many people tend to ignore that.
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 02:31 pm (UTC)Poor dears.
Glad you like dom!Daniel. He's really a sweetie underneath it all. :-)
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 03:52 pm (UTC)This is exactly what I was talking about. Forgetting that Jack and Daniel both had important heterosexual influences in their past is not only ignoring the facts, but limiting our understanding of who they are and what they can mean to each other.
That Jack would willingly submit to Daniel means more when put against his experience with women, and knowing how important Share was to Daniel helps us understand why he chooses only men now. It all just makes their relationship that much more satisfying to me.
And I noticed I'm not the only one who felt that way. So that was good to see. I just loved the bits with Share. They were just right, not enough to turn off someone who's normally het-unfriendly, and enough to satisfy someone who's interested in knowing how a Dominant Daniel would have felt with Share. Good job.
Oh, and I just loved the last line...what was the word you used? Just a bit of yearning. Nice. Especially since we know there's a happy ending in the making.
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 09:22 pm (UTC)I wasn't going to make it quite so yearn-y, but I peeked at what Daniel said to Jack after their first time together in HIAB, and realized he'd admitted to thinking about him, at least to some extent.
How could he not? Come on, Jack is sex on legs!! :-D
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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 05:53 pm (UTC)The backstory of his relationship with Sha're was also powerful and an elequent telling of the physical aspects of their marriage. You briefly touched on a few of their sexual scenarios and, I think, strengthened the aura of Jackson's personal personna by the simplicity of the descriptions. This is his nature and there's absolutely nothing twisted or perverse...he is a man who knowingly seeks to fulfill his needs without taking more than the other is willing to give.
Thanks for posting this fine work. I will be looking for more of your stories, knowing I won't be disappointed. Your detailed writing style and careful craftsmanship speaks well for an intelligent and thought-provoking author. Bravo-
Matt
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Date: Mar. 4th, 2007 02:09 am (UTC)Yes, Daniel is only interested in a mutual satisfaction of needs. He enjoys the feeling of power, but he never wants to take it - only to have it offered to him. He negotiated with his wife to gain some of the things he wanted; I couldn't see him being entirely happy with an ordinary physical relationship. And being in love wouldn't make that any easier, but more difficult to accept.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and the detailed feedback is very much appreciated. I failed to link to How It All Began in the body of my post, so if you haven't read that yet: http://sidlj.livejournal.com/1065.html
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Date: Mar. 5th, 2007 09:27 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Mar. 6th, 2007 01:38 pm (UTC)So I prompt you for the first fic, and get a second one...didn't that happen last time? I prompted you with rimming and then there were sequels? I like this. LOL.
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Date: Mar. 6th, 2007 03:20 pm (UTC)Het? What's that?