sid: (Daniel and Sha're)
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A companion piece to Solo Flight, Jack, NC-17.

Beta kudos to [profile] fiareynneand [profile] juliabk (who also gets the credit for the story title), and a big thank you to [personal profile] dustandrosesfor an idea she gave me in her comment to Jack's story.  :-)

Warnings: het, BDSM, masturbation

FORBIDDEN FRUIT
Two months before How It All Began
 
There was a limit to what porn could do for you, no matter how good it was, or how many of your buttons it pushed. This one was pretty good, and the two men were attractive, but Daniel’s mind kept wandering. He wanted to be doing, not watching. He stroked a slick hand idly up his cock. Maybe it was time for a trip to Denver. He squeezed the top of his cock, smiling at his body’s instant reaction to that idea. He could do it next weekend; it wouldn’t be a problem.
 
The club in Denver was discreet, but he still kept his visits to a minimum. Submissive men were always thick on the ground there, longing for a Dom to make them feel alive, to fulfill their fantasies. He could let his most forceful side come out to play when he was there. His needs would build up during his time away from the club, and the release of  tension was always exquisite.
 
Not sexual tension, per se. He wasn’t there to have orgasms. He really wasn’t interested in coming with strangers. He simply craved the power. Men kneeling at his feet, granting him the right to do with their bodies as he chose. To give them pain and pleasure and release. Most of them wanted to come, but not all by any means. Some just needed the release from their daily stresses that came with complete submission.
 
Daniel preferred the ones who wanted orgasm; the others always seemed a little sad to him, but he was prepared to torment and abuse them on occasion, if the mood struck him right. But, to him, the natural ending of a scene was when he would give permission to come, and the body of his willing subject would stiffen and spasm, and, finally, melt into boneless oblivion.
 
So much better than tears, although tears were welcome enough in conjunction with a good come, or leading up to it. Although stranger’s tears could never touch him the way a lover’s could. Especially if that lover were a man. Women’s tears came more easily, held less meaning for him.
 
He would never dominate a woman again, anyway. Not after Sha’re. Daniel smiled at the actors on the TV screen, one man placing intricately knotted ropes on the other’s body. Not that he had dominated her. Hardly. Sha’re was a chieftain’s daughter, and submission was not in her vocabulary, in any language. But she had been sensual and playful, and willing to please her husband in many things.
 
She had been absolutely stunning bound with colorful scarves. Which served equally well when used as a gag or blindfold. The first time he had covered her eyes, her cheeks had flooded with dusky red and her lips had parted in a soundless gasp. She had reached for him with desperate hands, pulling him onto her, into her…
 
The bound man on the screen was wincing as his nipples were clamped. No clamps available on Abydos, but he’d had his teeth and his hands, and Sha’re had wriggled and gasped and cried out as he had abused her tender flesh lovingly. Daniel put a hand to his chest and rolled his own nipple between his fingertips, feeling the sensation shooting down to his groin.
 
Sha’re hadn’t wanted to be spanked. Too noisy in their claustrophobically close community, and too demeaning. Naughty children were spanked; naughty wives likewise. To be overheard would be humiliating, and to have her Danyel treat her so would make her unhappy. She would lay across his lap and let him caress her lovely ass and finger her while she whispered his name and jerked her hips, but how he had longed to see his handprint etched upon her skin. He murmured an endearment in Abydonian as he watched the dominant on the screen feeding his cock into his partner’s eager mouth.
 
No more women for him. His fantasies, like his reality, centered solely around men now. There was one man at the SGC in particular who excited him. He pictured him now, on his knees, with Daniel’s cock in his mouth. Cheeks hollowed, long lashes fluttering against his skin. Hands bound behind his back, cock hard and weeping at the tip. Daniel’s fist tightened its grip. His own cock was weeping now, and the added slickness coated his palm and sped his stroke.
 
He was tall and lean. He looked military tough, he talked tough, he even walked tough. He was a living recruitment poster. But his lashes were enthralling, and he flushed sometimes when Daniel spoke to him, and the young lieutenant filled his fantasies these days. Bound, gagged, over his knee, taking his cock up the ass. Red, red ass. To have a Marine submit would be very nearly the ultimate power trip.
 
But not quite the ultimate; not for Daniel. The fantasy that he avoided thinking about was the true ultimate. To have power over the man who had nominal power over him. Oh, and he was tall and lean, too; walked and talked tough. Just the sort who might need the kind of release that Daniel’s skills could provide.
 
But he was Daniel’s team leader and best friend, and it was better not to even go there. It was all just fantasy, but there were safer subjects from which to choose. A galaxy full of them. But he was sexy, and he was handsome, and Daniel knew that he could be beautiful. Daniel could make him beautiful, and that thought made him ache a little inside.
 
The dominant on the screen pulled his cock out of the sub’s mouth and shot his sperm onto his face, fist pumping, filthy words coming from his mouth. Daniel barely noticed, and the face that he concentrated on fiercely as he came was Lieutenant Glenn’s.
 
But the name half-formed on his lips belonged to someone else.

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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trika.livejournal.com
Wow, talk about great timing. I hadn't checked LJ for a few days and when I do, your post is at the top of my friends page like you were waiting for me. :D

This is a great insight into Daniel and what he was feeling before Jack. And what a surprise you threw in there with the Lieutenant. Daniel not fantasizing about Jack even though that's who he really wants. Well done, Sid. *applauds*

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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juliabk.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah! Y'done good!!!!!!

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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starting-gate.livejournal.com
Sid posts Jack masturbation fic.
I post Jack and Daniel masturbation fic.
Sid posts Daniel masturbtion fic.

I like the way we think. ;-)

I'm glad you did this. I like the peek into what Daniel likes about D/s. And most excellent last line!

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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaidheil1974.livejournal.com
I think I like the ones where you get inside Daniel's head the best. Not sure why. But it's all good and this latest is certainly amazing.

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Date: Mar. 2nd, 2007 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com
You know, i'm so glad I know there's already a happy ending out there for this -- otherwise it could hurt too much! Lovely.

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaziwren.livejournal.com
I would love to leave a well-written piece of praise for you ....but ...brain...go...GUH!

*fans self*

*combusts*

I r ded.

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garneteve.livejournal.com
Wow...love these fics of yours revolving round How it all Began...love it!

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inthe-parlance.livejournal.com
I just wanted to say hello and tell you that your "How it all Began" storyline got me HOOKED on Jack/Daniel! I have seen exactly one episode of Stargate but the Jack/Daniel love is eating my brain.

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverfox.livejournal.com
Okay... *clears throat* (no, don't go there)

I've been avoiding these stories because of *coughhetcough* (Shau're bores me to tears except the narrative past tense) and the BDSM(I'll get to that in a sec). BUT I liked what you did here.

So... um, I tended to avoid your BDSM because of something you wrote a *long* time ago--and no, I don't recall what it was, I just disagreed with it, and my bad memory isn't all that useful for the critical feedback you'd ask for, so erm, don't ask. I only remember it being of a different understanding of BDSM, that's all--Now, it *was* a long time ago. And goddess knows that the shit I wrote a long time ago can't be compared to the stuff I write right now, so that said, (I'm hearing Ba'al, threatening the Earth) I decided to put my silly-assed hesitation away about the het and BDSM and just bloody read.

And I'm glad. :)

Now tell Julia to be quiet and stop goading. :-p

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
I like the idea of Daniel using scarves and teeth to get some of what he wanted while still respecting Sha're's boundaries.

I like this phrase, "abused her tender flesh lovingly".

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 01:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] theemdash
Homminah. *fans self* I do like a very aggressive Daniel on occasion.

I love the stuff with Sha're. Thank you for not forgetting that Daniel had a wife whom he actually cared for quite deeply. I think many people tend to ignore that.

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 03:52 pm (UTC)
ext_8622: (sg jack/daniel art and icon by skaterg8r)
From: [identity profile] dustandroses.livejournal.com
I am so proud to have helped inspire the idea for this fic! Yay, go me!

This is exactly what I was talking about. Forgetting that Jack and Daniel both had important heterosexual influences in their past is not only ignoring the facts, but limiting our understanding of who they are and what they can mean to each other.

That Jack would willingly submit to Daniel means more when put against his experience with women, and knowing how important Share was to Daniel helps us understand why he chooses only men now. It all just makes their relationship that much more satisfying to me.

And I noticed I'm not the only one who felt that way. So that was good to see. I just loved the bits with Share. They were just right, not enough to turn off someone who's normally het-unfriendly, and enough to satisfy someone who's interested in knowing how a Dominant Daniel would have felt with Share. Good job.

Oh, and I just loved the last line...what was the word you used? Just a bit of yearning. Nice. Especially since we know there's a happy ending in the making.

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Date: Mar. 3rd, 2007 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] matt51.livejournal.com
It's fic like this that pulls me right back into reading Stargate stories. You took a direction I've not seen and pulled the strands tight, weaving a careful tale of lust and affection and need, and produced a textured, heavy blanket of concealment. This is a Daniel Jackson I like to see: strong, certain, and unafraid to search out and find what he needs.

The backstory of his relationship with Sha're was also powerful and an elequent telling of the physical aspects of their marriage. You briefly touched on a few of their sexual scenarios and, I think, strengthened the aura of Jackson's personal personna by the simplicity of the descriptions. This is his nature and there's absolutely nothing twisted or perverse...he is a man who knowingly seeks to fulfill his needs without taking more than the other is willing to give.

Thanks for posting this fine work. I will be looking for more of your stories, knowing I won't be disappointed. Your detailed writing style and careful craftsmanship speaks well for an intelligent and thought-provoking author. Bravo-

Matt

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Date: Mar. 5th, 2007 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucifrix.livejournal.com
Once again, you make my girl parts happy. Thanks!

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Date: Mar. 6th, 2007 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wraith816.livejournal.com
Awwwww, poor Daniel. YOU'LL GET HIM SOON. *flaily hands*

So I prompt you for the first fic, and get a second one...didn't that happen last time? I prompted you with rimming and then there were sequels? I like this. LOL.

PS - stop making me read het-y stuff

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