'Joy in the Morning', J/D drabble, rated PG

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Here's a little quiet thing that wouldn't let me sleep until it was written:

 

JOY IN THE MORNING

 

It’s a fine line between ‘unconscious’ and ‘asleep’, but Daniel can see when Jack crosses it, his face changing as though a veil has been lifted. A glance at his teammates shows Daniel that Sam’s still fretting and Teal’c’s still hovering grimly.

 

They don’t see the change. But Daniel knows. All night long, looking at Jack has made him feel sick inside. Now what he sees makes him feel peaceful.

 

They can’t see. They’ve never lain awake next to Jack, aching with love, sated with love, watching him as he slumbers.

 

Daniel calls his name and Jack’s eyes slowly open.

Comments

A different perspective....

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It's interesting but I was getting vibes of a post-Meridian/pre-descension Daniel when I read this...which lent a whole other dimension of bittersweet to this lovely little piece for me.

Nicely done. : )

Re: A different perspective....

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Ooh, that's a lovely thought. Invisible!glowy-Daniel hovering at his lover's bedside. Not interfering mind you! Just waiting to see if he needs to. *g*

(And Jonas must have stepped away to get them all some more coffee, or maybe some breakfast, knowing his appetite)

Thank you for commenting, and making me think!