Ah! Day Five. I managed to do it. :-)
Hot off the press: Jim arrives home early from a trip and gets a surprise. ~725 PG-13 rated words. Un-beta'd, so please let me know if you spot anything that needs fixing.
(Excuse me while I laugh at the dog - I tell her to lie down and leave me alone for a minute and she lifts a paw to shake hands. Hee!)
Hot off the press: Jim arrives home early from a trip and gets a surprise. ~725 PG-13 rated words. Un-beta'd, so please let me know if you spot anything that needs fixing.
(Excuse me while I laugh at the dog - I tell her to lie down and leave me alone for a minute and she lifts a paw to shake hands. Hee!)
CONVENTIONAL WISDOM
Jim was exhausted when he came through the door. He never could sleep on airplanes. In addition, the stale pressurized air had dried out and irritated his nasal passages and he was still waiting for his ears to pop. All his focus was on getting himself into bed; his own bed, after two nights in a Chicago hotel and two days spent listening to long-winded seminars on interrogation techniques and reading body language and maintaining good relations with the public.
Jim was exhausted when he came through the door. He never could sleep on airplanes. In addition, the stale pressurized air had dried out and irritated his nasal passages and he was still waiting for his ears to pop. All his focus was on getting himself into bed; his own bed, after two nights in a Chicago hotel and two days spent listening to long-winded seminars on interrogation techniques and reading body language and maintaining good relations with the public.
He was exhausted.
That was the only possible explanation for why he hadn’t known what he was going to see when he got to the top of the stairs.
Blair. In his bed. Asleep.
Jim blinked. His jaw dropped. He lowered his suitcase gently to the floor, cocked his head and stared. Unless he’d dozed off in the cab and was dreaming all this, Blair was sleeping in his bed. Curled on his side, facing Jim, lips slightly parted, hair fanned out behind him. Sheet draped over his hips, bare from the waist up.
Jim’s eyes went to the other side of the bed. No indentation in the pillow. Blair hadn’t brought some woman up here, anyway.
That would have ruined everything.
So, why the hell…? “Sandburg.”
Eyelids lifted, blue slits appeared. “Jim?” The eyes got wide. “Shit!”
“Mind telling me what the hell is going on?”
“Oh, man, Jim, I am so sorry!” Blair was sitting up now, clutching the sheet. “I didn’t expect you until this afternoon!”
“Obviously.” Jim struggled to come to terms with the now apparent fact that Blair Sandburg was naked in his bed. “I decided to catch the red-eye.”
“I’m sorry,” Blair repeated anxiously. “I was going to wash the sheets, honest. I mean, I still will. Man, I apologize.”
“You’d wash the sheets and I’d never know, is that it? What, you just wanted to put one over on me?” It didn’t make any sense.
“No!” Blair looked even more shame-faced. “Well, yeah, it would have amounted to that, but I wasn’t trying to….”
“So, okay, that’s not why you’re in my bed. So, enlighten me. Because I’m sort of puzzled here, Chief.” Examine the details, but keep the big picture in mind.
“I just…I’ve always wanted to sleep up here. That’s…that’s all. I mean, great view,” Blair gestured over his shoulder, “nice big bed.”
Jim studied Blair’s flushed face. No, that wasn’t all. All the visual cues he was receiving said that Blair was obfuscating. “Let me ask you, if I hadn’t come home early, if you’d gotten away with it. Would you have felt guilty about it?”
“Well, yeah. Of course I would. Jim….”
“So why would you even do it? It just doesn’t fit.” Didn’t fit what he knew about Blair; didn’t fit the gap in the puzzle confronting Jim. If you’re not satisfied with the answers you’re getting, press your point.
“I already told you. I’ve just always wanted to sleep up here.” Blair looked down and picked at the sheet, his lips tightly pressed together.
This time Jim believed him. This time it rang true. A simple statement, delivered in a rather sad tone of voice. And if Jim could only get this last piece to slot into place, maybe he’d be able to see the whole picture. “Look at me,” Jim said quietly. Eye contact is key.
Blair raised his head and met Jim’s gaze with evident reluctance.
Jim looked into his wary eyes and inhaled sharply, his chest swelling as a thought, a hope hit him. Blair’s eyes widened in reaction, and his chest rose, too. “Was my being out of town part of that?”
“What? I don’t know what you mean,” Blair said.
But Jim, the lessons from the symposium still fresh in his mind, could tell without any doubt that he did. “When you’d think about sleeping up here, were you thinking about me being out of town?”
Blair’s mouth opened, but no words came out. His face said it all.
Jim took two steps forward. A sincere smile can produce amazing results when dealing with the civilian population. “Please tell me I was in the bed, too.”
Blair squealed. There was no other way to describe it. Squealed, threw back the sheet, sprang from the bed. Naked. Reaching for Jim.
It was the prettiest picture Jim could ever have imagined.
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 02:22 am (UTC)Nice solution to the 'puzzle'!
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 02:36 am (UTC)Yes, I'm going to agree with you. I'll change the tag. :-D
(I already had this story planned before the 'puzzle' prompt came out, but it was easy to incorporate and turned it into a more complete story, so I'm delighted!)
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 02:34 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 02:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 02:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 02:46 am (UTC)Hope the party went/is going well!
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 03:32 am (UTC)Now, when he goes back to work and reports to Simon on how helpful the conference was, think he'll mention this?
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:35 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 04:25 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:36 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 05:50 am (UTC)Perhaps there were a few more strokes to this?
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:38 pm (UTC)Mebbe a few licks, too. *eg*
But I leave that to the reader's imagination....
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:11 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:42 pm (UTC):-D
But I'm glad the naked in Jim's arms picture works for ya, too!
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 10:12 am (UTC)Hugs, Patt
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:44 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 10:37 am (UTC)I liked how you wove Jim's new knowledge into the storyline. Worked very well, I think.
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:46 pm (UTC)Thanks for letting me know what worked for you. :-)
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 03:24 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:47 pm (UTC)Glad you enjoyed!!
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:39 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 06:47 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 07:41 pm (UTC)I enjoyed the story.
Laurie.
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Date: Oct. 27th, 2007 08:16 pm (UTC)*g*
Glad you enjoyed it, Laurie!