Brittle, J/D drabble, rated PG
Nov. 22nd, 2006 01:47 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sidSG-1 is being held captive in this dark drabble.
BRITTLE
Bend, don’t break. Don’t let them see how close...
Bone-exhausted. But there’s no rest. Don’t break. There’s still…
Daniel deserves a medal. If I live long enough…
Don’t. I will live, and I’ll make sure...
Most days, he’s the only thing standing between us and death, and I know it if nobody else does. I see what it does to him, one piece of his soul at a time. I knew he had courage, but I never realized how much.
Or how much I love him.
We haven’t seen him for three days now. He’s all alone with that monster.
Sequel: http://http://sid.dreamwidth.org/79306.html 'Breaking'
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 01:26 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 01:59 pm (UTC)*pets your icon*
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 03:00 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 03:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 03:36 pm (UTC)(Yeah, I know, you warned it was dark)
And top it all off, I bet the monster's female. ;)
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 03:49 pm (UTC)What are you trying to do, make things worse? The monster is not female. *shudders to the depths of her slasher's soul*
Have a great holiday, and assume they all get rescued really, really soon. :-)
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 03:57 pm (UTC)That's SO heartwrenching!
But my mind is screaming now. Who has them? What are they doing to Daniel? What will happen when Daniel and Jack are reunited??? I have to know!
"We" haven't seen him indicates that Daniel is the only one being singled out. "I knew he had courage, but I never realized how much," could actually suggest that wherever he is, he went there willingly, knowing Daniel he probably traded himself for the others. (Although, that is my VERY FAVORITE plotline in any fandom so I could be projecting here. LOL.)
Seriously, you got so much true Jack emotion into this little drabble it's incredible. I would love to know what the backstory is, what the resolution is. Please consider continuing this, even if it's ust a series of drabbles, segments from different points of view along the wa, just enough for us to get the plot.
Anyway, thank you for sharing.
Love,
Julie-Rae
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 04:01 pm (UTC)But I'm a slasher, so my first thought was yeah. Guy. Violent. Sadistic... guy.
Love,
Julie-Rae
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 04:05 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:12 pm (UTC)MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!
Have a lovely Happy Thanksgiving!
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:13 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:13 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:16 pm (UTC)Happy Turkey to you, too! :-P
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:19 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:21 pm (UTC)I'm glad it spoke to you, and I hope the screaming in your brain dies down soon! *smooches*
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:23 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:25 pm (UTC)Jack's heart and Daniel's soul - OMG they need to be rescued RIGHT NOW! *sobs*
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:27 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:40 pm (UTC)(This is spacemonkey43 - same journal, new name)
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:48 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:50 pm (UTC)While you there...
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 05:59 pm (UTC)*meeps with you*
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 06:01 pm (UTC)Your pitiful attempt to shame me into taking action has BACKFIRED!
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Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 06:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: Nov. 22nd, 2006 06:14 pm (UTC)*sniff*
:-);-);-);-)
Might *never* get the last of that AU done at this rate. ;-) In much too much pain to work. :-)