Stargate drabble, NC-17, Mezzanine Universe

[sid]

Have you met the Mezzanine Universe yet?  

ivorygatesand synecdochicinvented it recently.  It's an AU of synecdochic's Broken Wings AU.  Broken Wings is the story of Cameron Mitchell, disabled and out of the Air Force after the battle in Antarctica, and JD Nielson, Jack's clone.

The Mezzanine 'verse throws in the twist of Cameron being a female, and brings Daniel Jackson into the picture.

Anywho (and you could immerse yourself for days in all the wonderful stories she's/they've written), after reading 96 thousand words of Cammie/JD/Daniel - I wrote a DRABBLE!  Because I'm warped that way.

 

Het threesome (shocking, I know!)

CAMMIE ON WRY

“You’re fucking worthless, Nielson. I ain’t Great-Aunt Louisa’s porcelain tea service.”

 

JD snorted into Cammie’s neck.

 

“Daniel knows how to fuck a girl proper, don’t you, babydoll?” Cammie stroked fingers through a damp sideburn.

 

Daniel didn’t have enough breath yet to answer, so he just reached lazily around her and slid his hand down JD’s spine, pulling them closer.

 

“Where’d you learn to fuck ass, anyway?” 

 

But Daniel felt her tightening around his fading erection, felt the power of JD’s thrusts through the membrane that separated their cocks. Grinned at JD as Cammie flew apart in their arms, still complaining.

Comments

[synecdochic]

I still love this so damn much.

(Don't suppose we could talk you into writing more, hm?)

[sid]

Hm. *flails* Nothing's impossible, I suppose!

*rueful grin* Maybe a double drabble?

I'm really glad you like it - I find it impossible to judge this one objectively. OR subjectively. Strange, that!

[lavenderlocks.livejournal.com]

Oh, honestly, I'll just quit my job and read pr0n all day :):)

How do you do it? It's tone-perfect!

And hot. num-num.

[sid]

Hee! Well, I just made Cammie as insulting as possible (to JD, that is) and lifted her turns of phrase wholesale. Glad I managed to capture the tone for you!

The whole universe is peculiarly hot. That's got to be the appeal. ;-)

[lavenderlocks.livejournal.com]

Yersss.

Although I'm still having trouble 'picturing' JD.
How do you see him?

[sid]

I don't really picture him OR Cammie. Once in a while I get Jack or Cam from what I'm reading, but mostly they're like OCs to me. Kinda foggy and faceless when I'm visualizing a scene, like the one at the gravesite or Daniel on the couch at the condo. Sam and Daniel I can see, the surroundings I can see, Cammie and JD aren't so clear.

But then I have a real-life problem with recognizing faces, so that might explain it.