'Forfeit', J/D double drabble, rated R
Oct. 17th, 2008 03:58 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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FORFEIT
Learning to treat men like nameless, faceless lumps of meat hadn’t come easily to Daniel. He’d longed to offer a little more friendliness, a little more humanity. But he’d done it enough times that it had become second nature by now. He imagined that he had a definite reputation in the Springs clubs and bars. When you let yourself get picked up by Daniel Jackson, you got bent over the arm of his couch for a slow, hard fuck and then you got shown the door.
But when one door closes, another one opens, as the saying goes.
And behind that door, watching on closed circuit television, was Jack, getting a hard-on the only way he could.
Dysfunctional didn’t even begin to describe what the two of them were.
Iraq, and the things that had been done to him there, had changed Jack forever. Now he could only watch as Daniel gave other men the one thing that Jack couldn’t accept, no matter how much he would have enjoyed it at an earlier point in his life, no matter how much he might still crave it.
Jack had been made dysfunctional through brute force and psychological torture.
Daniel, through love.
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2008 08:16 pm (UTC)I should mention that I like this about now, shouldn't I? *g*
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2008 08:44 pm (UTC)Love it.
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2008 09:05 pm (UTC)Brilliant, awful, hot and soo sad all in one......fabulous writing dearie....
Deeds xx
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2008 02:49 am (UTC)Just make sure you let me know what you come up with!
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2008 10:32 am (UTC)Oh. So good it hurts.
I want more of this. More, more, more. It hits all the right angst and kink buttons.
This cannot be left here!
Write it or I will!
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2008 05:43 pm (UTC)So pleased that it pushed your buttons!
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2008 05:04 pm (UTC)Hmm. A there's more than a little writerly S & M in you. You're really very good at what you do. Short and sharp and pointy. This was excellent.
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Date: Oct. 23rd, 2008 10:43 pm (UTC)This actually seems like a realistic resolution to the "Jack loves Daniel but Jack hurts Daniel" theme that runs throughout canon!
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2008 12:12 am (UTC)Love ain't easy. *sighs with you*
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2008 01:04 pm (UTC):-)
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2008 06:01 am (UTC)Damn fine job. Thank you.
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2008 08:10 am (UTC)You know, the reason this hits so hard is that you sneak it in, with a mild beginning and then: whammo! also... it's too realistic. Which actually says more about the dark nature of our shows' underbelly. :-(
Good. That done - now write happy fluffy-fic! ;-)
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2008 01:07 pm (UTC)*puts fluffy-fic on to-do list*
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Date: Oct. 25th, 2008 06:18 pm (UTC)Yes.